The Vacancy - Page 24
Added 2024-05-03 20:57:44 +0000 UTCSo calm, as if nothing happened!
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Thank you for your patience with these, I hope you're enjoying them! More to come soon, and as always, thank you for your support. Means the world!
~TB
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EDIT: Grammar
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All things I should have caught much sooner, thank you. Will update this with grammatical errors fixed soon.
TeaBucket
2024-05-04 14:05:05 +0000 UTCGrammar nits: Panel 6, bubble 2: "in the hope that" - singular, since TL is only hoping for one thing. "would put you at ease" - this matches verb aspects ("took" and "put"). Panel 7, bubble 1: "any doubt you have" - removes stray word "of".
HP1741A
2024-05-03 23:11:55 +0000 UTCI wonder if she got lessons from Starlight about anger management ^^
Tidmouth
2024-05-03 21:07:09 +0000 UTC
