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Glass Desert Emperor - The Prewriting

These are the notes I took for myself when writing this story, basically a skeletonized conversation with myself over where I was going, what I needed to establish, and how I needed to establish it. There's a lot of stuff here that's probably never going to be explicitly spelled out in the text, but it's nice to have the reasoning behind it ready, so if I do want to offer a Pro Wrestling-level of explanation, sure, here's the kayfabe. This might be a little maddening to read, as I can kinda just ramble at myself- if you think I'm longwinded in text, this you're getting me after I pare my shit down, most of the time -but, if you want to see what's under the hood of this storyline? Welcome, I'll have more for you soon.

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[Van is hunting a Hargrave associate that’s apparently lost his nerve: where is he hiding? How many does he have with him? Where’s he set up?]

[What was the intel that Simon gave Van? How did it influence his plan of attack? What sort of a bodycount is his infiltration going to cause?]

[How voluntary is this guy’s cooperation? Is he tired, or is Snare going to need to peel some information out of his head?]

[The Questions]

[Who’s the AX that comes for this guy and Van?]


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