Peter Parker's Multiverse Regression - Chapter 3 - Task Failed Successfully - Feat. Mary Jane, Liz Allen
Added 2024-11-18 11:38:43 +0000 UTCIn the three weeks following Peter 616’s transmigration into the body of a different Peter Parker in a new and unfamiliar dimension...
Down below is a hyperlink to a Google Doc containing the chapter.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jLg_OSY7u-vd2Krc-a2ktuFiiaHoJM5RYhb7imPh7i4/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Any chance there’ll be a new chapter soon?
Aman Karim
2025-03-12 10:17:39 +0000 UTCThis is fucking awesome!!!! Super looking forward to the next chapter!!
Elizabeth Rose
2025-01-04 18:43:33 +0000 UTCThis is my favorite story you’re writing hope there’s an update soon
Titxv
2024-12-22 10:25:08 +0000 UTCFavorite story so far will there be another update any time soon?
Monstermash
2024-12-19 03:29:04 +0000 UTCHow old is black cat in this story? I would guess mid to late 20s.
samuel pupino
2024-12-16 10:53:57 +0000 UTCMj as jackpot just seems silly to me. I mean I get why but who would want superpowers that are dependent on the gods of R.N.G. that is something you give a joke character not a hero. Felicia could take mj under her wing and teach her. When asked she's helping mj with her modeling career. Mj could be this worlds hellcat.
samuel pupino
2024-12-16 10:50:24 +0000 UTCOkay maybe not a huge business but maybe something small. Cuz right now they think oh he sold a tech patent made a bunch of money and then spent it all now if he had something that brought a constant source of money the girls would like it more
Monstermash
2024-12-14 22:50:19 +0000 UTCThe web shooters are still present with Gwen Stacy, but I desired my Spider-Man be an amalgamation of all the best spider-person abilities, from all of the various dimensions.
Karmealion
2024-12-14 12:08:05 +0000 UTCI do intend to get into that stuff, but Peter would rather not stand out in the process of amassing wealth, because prestige comes with additional scrutiny (also, at this point he’s only been young again for three weeks or so).
Karmealion
2024-12-14 12:01:21 +0000 UTCLove the smut but also hoping to see him actually setting up a business to make money
Monstermash
2024-12-14 11:46:22 +0000 UTCCan i ask why did you give peter organic wedding? The web-shooters are a staple of the Spider-Man mythos.
samuel pupino
2024-12-09 10:53:50 +0000 UTCI gave Felicia the stage performer blonde hair because it seemed dumb for such a high profile individual to keep the same hair for her stage and criminal persona. Now I think you’re right, and I’ll stop sweating the small stuff.
Karmealion
2024-11-30 18:29:11 +0000 UTCI gave Felicia the stage performer blonde hair because it seemed dumb for such a high profile individual to keep the same hair for her stage and criminal persona. Now I think you’re right, and I’ll stop sweating the small stuff.
Karmealion
2024-11-30 18:28:43 +0000 UTCI agree with Cameolon about Felicia having natural white hair. But comic wise I think her and Mj's breast are roughly the same. Liz could have the bigger booty out of the three 😂
Dante Sparda
2024-11-30 15:50:29 +0000 UTCA little pet peeve from me: how can Peter have a poster of mj in his room when she isn’t a model yet? And also please more Felicia with natural white hair and bigger breasts than both mj and Liz (just cuz it’s canon)
Cameolon
2024-11-26 11:06:02 +0000 UTCMOAR! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!
Salvage48
2024-11-26 07:59:00 +0000 UTCYou could have it to where he only learned basic magic spells that helped with his superhero career. Here's a possible list of magic could have learned: 1. Healing magic, 2.Short Range Teleportation(with a limit), 3. Reinforcement Magic(from fate stay/night) to enhance his body and webs, 4. Spatial Storage Magic(to store extra equipment and supplies), 5. Summoning Magic(spiders).
Ike Vann
2024-11-25 20:47:14 +0000 UTCIt's an idea I've been playing around with, but if I do, it won't be to the extent that he's a Dr. Strange-esque wizard. OP powers are my jam, but power creeps kill stories.
Karmealion
2024-11-24 19:08:09 +0000 UTCDid Peter learn any magic during his long life in 616? Because cloning magic would be useful for when he gets more women in his harem, not to mention for his time as spider-man.
Ike Vann
2024-11-24 18:03:36 +0000 UTC“Don’t get involved with MJ” didn’t even last three chapters 😂 thank you for updating!
KillzoneDude
2024-11-20 02:37:37 +0000 UTCThanks for the update!
Frizzi
2024-11-18 18:46:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the update I was looking forward to this story.
DNAjester
2024-11-18 17:01:05 +0000 UTCVERY nice. Looks like the ladies are sanding off some of Peter's rough edges pretty effectively. I love the way MJ changes his whole dynamic. Felicia has a lot of potential too.
Travis Clemens
2024-11-18 15:41:45 +0000 UTCNice, I like this fic. Glad to have an update. Honestly, the whole putting them in danger thing, just give MJ powers. One of the best spiderman comic series (renew your vows) was very well received and had a successful run before they started focusing on spiderling (the daughter) over Mary Jane as spinnerette and Peter as spiderman (marginalizing spiderman in a spiderman comic is just stupid), also wasn't there some mind screwery with Mephisto involved? Can'tquite remember. As for Liz Allen, I could go either way for her (staple or side) but wasn't she screwball at one point in one version? Also didn't she bond with a symbiote at some point as well (go agent venom route with her) in another version? Ultimate marvel has her as a pyrkinetic mutant, so much to play with. Black cat will be black cat and Gwen is ghost spider. Just maybe not the jackpot route ( not a fan of discount Domino) unless you think you can rework it. As always, looking forward to more.
Dylan Pullock
2024-11-18 15:10:25 +0000 UTCWooo
DNAjester
2024-11-18 13:09:23 +0000 UTC
