King of Champions 16
Added 2025-11-21 02:42:26 +0000 UTCI don’t own RWBY since I’m not a team nor Harry
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There are some missing words in this section: "like a proper rifle, complete with"
lostone2
2025-11-22 08:09:18 +0000 UTCHuh. Well, I guess they all won and lost something in this chapter. I hope we get to see Lorgar again. If he's anything like the fanatic baby I assume you're basing him off of, I'd truly love to see what you could make of a guy like that in this type of setting. I absolutely loved seeing Pyrrha vs Adam. It was quite cathartic to see someone from the original cast being able to go solo (even handicapped!) against that obsessive lunatic and NOT being instantly one-shotted! And finally there's Apacci. Honestly, I'm kinda disappointed. I'd have thought you'd have milked his treachery for a majority of the story, rather than end if here in the 'Beacon Arc' as it were. Oh well. Overall, a FANTASTIC chapter!!
Tellemicus Sundance
2025-11-22 07:04:59 +0000 UTC
