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Added 2025-11-01 05:22:47 +0000 UTCI ain’t Japanese, nor can I draw.
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My two biggest complaints for this chapter is that there are two sections in the story where your thoughts/beta have been left in the story and it's also clear that it might need another pass through Grammarly or someone to look for spelling/grammar. While the chapters that are filled with action and world changing actions are fun to read it's these moments that I love the most. Reading how the world changes and evolves due to the actions of people as it makes the world feel alive. Especially as we get a glimpse into the decisions and actions of other people instead of just focusing on the Strawhats and their allies. Personally I'm indifferent to the idea that Kuma was somehow able to live but I am glad that he arrived and was able to stop the fight. As I would not have wanted a scenario where Bonney is constantly chasing Luffy down to kill him for killing her father; as eventually I can see Luffy having to kill her and the knowledge that he killed a young girl would weigh heavily on his mind. But I was not a fan of the fight. Vivi and Robin incapacitated all of the attackers and that just left Luffy, Bonney, and Sentomaru and yet Luffy was struggling throughout the fight. Considering the skill he showed in the fight against the marines he should have been able to knock them out easily. While I'm sure the two of them are strong neither one gave the feeling of being able to push Luffy as far as they did even if he wasn't trying to kill them or use his more dangerous abilities his skill as a fighter should have put them down easily. I don't know if the communication snails would work this deep underwater but I feel as if this conversation is something that Hancock and Makino should also be present for. Regardless I am looking forward to seeing the awe and wonder on their faces and to know that there is going to be a lot of discussions between Robin and Luffy about what he remembers as her inquisitive mind will want to know everything that she can.
Braeden1002
2025-11-11 13:51:40 +0000 UTCGood chapter, I look forward to the next time this story wins the poll
Arcanasage
2025-11-04 13:36:08 +0000 UTC
