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Heroes of the High Seas Chapter 7

Howdy all. Hopefully, in the future, there won’

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Seen and corrected... finally

vimesenthusiast

I've loved this chapter and the story as whole so far. The comedy and fluff are great, the action and world building are amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next! Great work man!👍

Xander1994

A most excellent addition! I'm glad to see you found a way to make the Marine thing sort of reasonable. That was honestly my main concern all along with this story. But working/training directly under Garp will be both good for them, and makes their being Marines for a time actually work. I'm more interested than ever in seeing how this develops!

Novus

As much as I GREATLY anticipated and enjoyed this long awaited chapter, I gotta say that I would've been happy wait an extra day or three. There are several small but consistent typos and errors scattered throughout the length. Such when Izuku and Tenya were together, you kept typing it as 'Izuku and Izuku'. And that's just the most glaring one I can point out. Oh well.

Tellemicus Sundance

There are at least a couple times where Izuku is paired off with someone else but it's described as "Izuku and Izuku". Other than that i thought it was a great chapter!

Aragorn93

The Chapter number is based on the prologue on here being chapter 1 over on fanfic. Hence why i jumped to 7 instead of 6.

vimesenthusiast

Where is chapter 6? I can't find it.

Tim Schwarz


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