Effect of a Horse and a Dragon #3
Added 2025-03-01 02:40:28 +0000 UTCHowdy, all. This was the winner, by a very thin
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They have some in canon - different language, the reverance for the homeworld, so forth, but I do want to add more. One instance of Herbert was wrong, the other right lol. Same for gift.
vimesenthusiast
2025-03-04 19:46:05 +0000 UTCYep will get to it today, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2025-03-04 15:48:21 +0000 UTCSent you back 2 days ago an update, most likely too busy again?
Hiryo
2025-03-04 06:09:39 +0000 UTCVery nice, i like the way you show the slowly developing relationship and give the Quartals some cultural identity. As always dragon has some problem with certain words: sentient beings became senti and beings. Herb became Herbert, and geth became gift or gith. The battle with dragon and autocorrect continues
Sarlisark
2025-03-02 11:05:56 +0000 UTCAs always this is just really awesome and I eagerly await the next chapter!!! I just can't put it down
Ranma_Leopard
2025-03-01 06:56:16 +0000 UTCI love this story. I really hope the Council is humiliated more. Should be fun when Kasumi shows up.
MultiverseCosms
2025-03-01 06:10:14 +0000 UTCRavenous this One is for good tales. Feed this One more stories of this quality and this One shall be satiated... for a time. also love this and all of your other works
Eragon Gravelyn
2025-03-01 05:20:17 +0000 UTC
