FILFy34
Added 2025-02-09 14:13:48 +0000 UTCAin’t British, can’t draw.
FINALLY. Here
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While the chapter was slow, I do respect the need for this chapter leading into the final fights of the story (or at least I am assuming that these are the last fights). There are so many different characters and factions that needed to be brought together into this one central location. Adding in the need to balance plans and traps from everyone. So, I completely understand why this chapter was more focused on setting up and that we only were seeing the different groups splitting up and getting ready to fight. There are two things that I hope come about from this arc. The first is that everyone from Harry’s faction and those associated with him come back alive. That is not to say that they cannot be injured with serious wounds (like loss of limbs or an eye) but I want them all to go back home alive. The other thing that I want to happen, Akhenaten and Nefertiti have to die. I don’t care if Cao-Cao and Rivezem live and are able to escape. Cao-Cao is a hypocrite who has fallen into the fallacy of his legend and belief in himself. While Rivezem is a powerful person he is too arrogant and prideful and even if he runs away to recover everyone else will just get stronger as he stagnates. But Akhenaten and Nefertiti they have to die; you created two characters for this series that I did not know that I would absolutely hate. You have had other villains in your stories while annoying and have to die for plot reasons these are the first two characters that I would be annoyed and frustrated if they somehow found a way to escape and live. So I am hoping that by the end of the story they will both be killed.
Braeden1002
2025-02-18 23:53:01 +0000 UTCCrap. Thanks I will change that tomorrow
vimesenthusiast
2025-02-14 06:39:21 +0000 UTCThe attached documents are for Making Waves and not FILFy
Braeden1002
2025-02-14 02:54:33 +0000 UTCseen and corrected, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2025-02-11 17:56:49 +0000 UTCGreat chapter looking forward to those two getting what’s coming to them from Harry
Dark epyon
2025-02-10 19:51:39 +0000 UTCCorrections: Sirzechs grumbled for a few moments but his two friends turned away, and Sirzechs, sighing, moved after him until he was between the two once more. moved after him -> moved after them “Then it’s a good thing Henry, Rias-tan and their group are the only ones making them,” Sirzechs said, shutting down that line of discussion for the moment. Henry -> Harry Connla was an Irishman, although he hardly looked the part, having heavily tanned skin, with lank black hair, and deep black eyes, which she normally hid behind a pair of sunglasses. she normally hid behind a pair of sunglasses -> he normally hid behind a pair of sunglasses It was remarkably shortsighted of them, Akhenaten thought, staring down from where he sat on the sofa into ace crying pool that showed him everything going on well, well below his current position. ace crying pool -> a scrying pool For more than an hour, the group was able to spot even magic-based traps, springing them or avoiding them. But their luck could not last forever. even magic-based traps -> even more magic-based traps With a wave of her hand, Grayfia shattered a large segment of it, sending the pieces flying in words, killing and maiming... in words -> inwards It was indeed the two of us. A plan long in the making, longer in the finding the finding. Duplicate the finding Akhenaten mused, turning to keep Harry and his sights keep Harry and his sights -> keep Harry in his sights
WinTush
2025-02-10 09:20:02 +0000 UTC
