Death's Avenger 11
Added 2024-11-29 03:33:00 +0000 UTCEdited Black Friday: Hey all. Sorry for all th
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Took me forever to read and review, sorry. I really appreciate the changes you've already made; especially after playing through the warcraft games again and playing wow classic. I forgot how dumb the state of the world is. Expected from you, but extremely appreciated nonetheless.
Justin Sully
2024-12-21 22:42:32 +0000 UTCJust goes to show how much world building and exploration there is to do in World of Warcraft when you don't care about the so-called canon events. Well, that, and the passage of time is very up in the air LOL.
vimesenthusiast
2024-12-18 14:59:09 +0000 UTCwow i just converted all 11 chapters into 1 word doc to send to my kindle over 130k already and around 400 pages :O already book size.
Tom smith
2024-12-15 04:53:25 +0000 UTCYup. I prefer Malfurion to Illidan, whom I loathe. But Tyrande deserves better.
MultiverseCosms
2024-12-04 21:04:28 +0000 UTCWoW is one of my favorite realms for fanfics, and this story just keeps adding to the list of reasons why.
Benjamin Bravo
2024-12-04 01:47:43 +0000 UTCnice chapter thx for writing it nice seeing some of the challenge's with the harpy's fun meeting one of the greens
frank schellingerhout
2024-12-01 20:39:46 +0000 UTCI could, and will go into dragon culture and stuff in the future. But i wanted to make it clear that from the Green's perspective, the Blues are a dying group.
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 18:40:09 +0000 UTCIt isn't, but that's from our perspective. Not Harry's. He knows about half-breeds, sure, but would he be willing to take the chance? Not without some reassurance.
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 18:36:33 +0000 UTCHonestly I think the tyrande/malfurion relationship gets respected a little too much by most writers in the space simply because it's one of the few cannon relationships WoW has maintained. I understand that the elves are extremely long lived and that some percentage of the time he remained in the dream was because Fandral is a ass. However he still left tyrande alone to run a country for thousands of years. Even if his motivations are understandable, that is not a good way to maintain a relationship.
Cormag81
2024-11-30 16:28:30 +0000 UTCAlternatively you could say only 10 fully grown Wyrms were left. I believe the life cycle of Dragons is supposed to be egg-whelp-dragon-wyrm-(ancient wyrm)
Sarlisark
2024-11-30 08:12:28 +0000 UTC... now I feel hopeful. Just figured as almost no one splits them, sadly.
MultiverseCosms
2024-11-30 04:54:35 +0000 UTCWhile I get basilisks could be considered unnatural due to how they are made, there is nothing to say phoenixes are unnatural as it is never explicitly stated how they are born. As for them both being creatures born from eggs, the simple answer is that magical conception and magical crossbreeding are weird in HP. I mean there are examples of humans crossbreeding with giants, goblins, veela, house elves, trolls, and vampires (I saw the last three on the HP wiki under the page Half-breed so I have no idea if you would consider them canon). A wilder example would be that Hagrid was able to breed a manticore (a magical creature with the body of a lion) with a fire crab to make Blast-Ended Skrewts. That doesn't even account for the mother's influence considering how Azeroth has numerous races of varying magical potential and abilities. The idea that Harry's kids inherit either his hybrid status or just some of the racial abilities isn't that wild.
King_Gluttony
2024-11-30 04:53:48 +0000 UTC... how do you know this?
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 04:03:45 +0000 UTCChanged the Blue Dragons to hundred rather than ten, and the rest has been corrected, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 04:03:19 +0000 UTCYep. And he will be getting older and younger throughout the series.
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 04:02:40 +0000 UTCSeen and corrected, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 04:01:19 +0000 UTCI don't think so, honestly. For one thing, the basilisk side - it ain't a natural creature. Nor are the pheonix. And both sides are egg layers... how the hell would that work with his human side? Not a area I want to get into right now.
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-30 03:55:56 +0000 UTCA very nice chapter that I liked a lot. As always dragon interpreted some words wrong, or your substitution word was not changed: pharaoh should probably be furrow, or however that word is written. Oliver should be Ohn'ara. Also you should maybe change the number of alive blie dragons, simce 10 might be too few- for a old long loved race, that lays clutches of eggs even less than a thousand on all of azeroth(world) is a small number. You might need to think of their number in contrast to the other flights and which population seems adequate for them.
Sarlisark
2024-11-29 22:38:58 +0000 UTCGreat chapter and a fair time skip especially since we're still at least a few centuries out from the first invasion/war. I'm also excited the harry has met his first friendly dragon as I think they are the most likely to be legitimate long term romance options for Harry outside the elves. Again some sections that caught my eye while reading. "Harry then run the water out of the wood, can turning into into dried wood as if it had been laid out in the sun for months before a kind of laminate was pulled put on it" Looks like dragon garbled this, im able to get the jist of what your trying to say but its a little unclear. "winking at the large striped tiger that was Rachel’s mouth." From context i think this is meant to be mount not mouth, also im not sure rachel is the correct name
Cormag81
2024-11-29 20:14:30 +0000 UTCW...why was it caught by my spam filter? THE FUQ?! Thanks! Will go over it and replace this chapter later today.
vimesenthusiast
2024-11-29 20:11:22 +0000 UTCGood chapter. You were always going to need a transitory or anyways. Have you noticed this is the oldest Harry has ever reached even from earth?
Tigger42
2024-11-29 13:54:03 +0000 UTCI adore this story so much. One of my favs, along with Heroes and Bhaalson. I admit, I know it won't happen but I still kind of ship Harry and Tyrande.
MultiverseCosms
2024-11-29 12:45:45 +0000 UTCI find it hilarious that Harry has been PG rated with his swearing through the whole chapter. Poor Quetzal being done dirty by DNS and getting called Quincy the whole time. Great chapter! Always annoying to deal with transition chapters, but at least things are moving along now. The time skip was well done, and now a very interesting character has shown up. I can't wait for more now!
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
2024-11-29 10:04:51 +0000 UTCYou've got a few placeholders for names still stuck in there. Both name replacers and some things like {Shaman}. That said, excellent chapter! I'm glad things are jumping forward a little bit and the Green Dragon that appeared seems fun! On one of your notes: “I believe that we need to restart the great tree implantation program.” {That doesn’t sound at all like something a kaldorei would say, but I’m having trouble figuring out how he would put it.} The program that my fellow Druids and I worked on to take saplings from Nordrassil and spread them throughout the world.” How about something like: “I believe that we need to restart the Greet Seeding. The undertaking that my fellow Druids and I worked on to transplant saplings from Nordrassil, seeding them throughout the world to protect us all from corruption!”
Novus
2024-11-29 09:29:07 +0000 UTCI love this story
Gilorad
2024-11-29 07:58:01 +0000 UTCSince when has quetzal been called quincy? That needs some revision
Joseph Klos
2024-11-29 07:17:34 +0000 UTCAs always this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Ranma_Leopard
2024-11-29 06:59:04 +0000 UTCWouldn't Harry's kids inherit his hybrid nature and potentially be immortal like he is?
King_Gluttony
2024-11-29 04:35:02 +0000 UTCI did respond and send it back to you, it says it went through on my end.
Alex Crate
2024-11-29 03:38:23 +0000 UTC
