FILFy33backup
Added 2024-10-27 16:25:01 +0000 UTCMore like a first screening, since I won't post
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Huh... had hoped to see more opinions on the magical web concept. Sad Emoji.
vimesenthusiast
2024-10-30 03:28:07 +0000 UTCThat would be in orbit, which would only be the outermost layer. The other two layers would still be issues. And where did the magicals say anything about working with the Nonmagicals? That would be a whole new debate. I... may put that in, admittedly. I know the segment of the chapter you're talking about, and I could do that easily enough.
vimesenthusiast
2024-10-28 14:54:10 +0000 UTCIf they’re going to involve the non-magical world anyway, need the runic arrays to ne high up and can’t afford things getting in between or messing with them, why not usr satellites? Can’t Riad portal small satellites with the runes into orbit and then use gps to position them with literal mechanical precision?
Christian E. Y.
2024-10-27 23:42:12 +0000 UTCThanks! Will correct
vimesenthusiast
2024-10-27 20:43:20 +0000 UTCYou've got a few "Ophelia"s here instead of "Ophis"es. Great stuff, though!
Peter K
2024-10-27 18:17:36 +0000 UTC
