Heroes 4
Added 2024-09-30 23:09:35 +0000 UTCAlas, for Tomon's RL, it has eaten him. That,
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I fucking love it!! I'm kinda curious about how they will react to the Marines and World Government when they see how they really are and where they are heading with the Absolute Justice nonsense. Also curious if Robin will still be a Strawhat and if she will be then if they will join the crew at some point or not!xD
Érica C. Assunção
2024-12-27 08:43:17 +0000 UTCI hope that Izuku's personality will shift further in the next two chapters to the point he has stopped having so many self-esteem issues. The suicidal tendencies will be harder to get rid of. Momo is a goddess. That is all. Mei will indeed have a large explosion when they run into the first Marine equivalent of the underwater sonar team from the Monkey boys, lol. As for Tenya and Tsuyu. Tsuyu is going to keep having issues for a good long while. She's the one who has left the biggest, most close-knit family behind. It will be a continuing issue. Iida... hmm... yeah, he'll have issues with executions, but by that point they will all have understood how different this world is from their own. The rest of the marine nonsense, he will have a lot more issues with. To the point he might be the first one to say that the group should break away from them. But that is at least two arcs down the line.
vimesenthusiast
2024-10-03 22:35:11 +0000 UTCAlways pleased to see more of this! I admit, I was sort of put off for the first bit of it, since Izuku's base personality is...irritating. I know his lack of self-esteem and suicidal self-sacrifice is accurate, particularly from the part of the timeline you plucked him, but it gets old Fast. Thankfully, the rest of this release more than made up for that, showing both the rest of the crew and his better traits via all the discussions and interactions. Momo is proving to be a delight, as the Best Girl in series should be (but isn't in canon because she was tragically under utilized T-T). Mei is always awesome, you're doing a great job of expanding on Melissa given how little we actually see of her in MHA, and Shoto having an actual sex drive is amusing given how he's usually portrayed. I'm looking forward to poor Mei eventually realizing that, at least on the Grand Line, the tech level exists where she actually could have made radar without being questioned (the Saruyama Alliance had outright weaponized sonar and they weren't exactly top tier anything). Along with eventually realizing cyborgs and other high-tech is present enough that it wouldn't have made anyone twitch too much. She's going to be so pissed everyone made her tone it down... I'm less looking forward to the inevitable breakdowns Tenya and Tsuyu are going to have when they realize that the closest thing to law and order is actively more evil than many of the pirates. They might have been okay if they'd landed in the of the Blues. But Tenya, in particular, is going to short circuit with exposure to the types of Marines common in the Grand Line. I also wonder just how they are going to react to the realization (if they ever have it) that Honey Queen and Bear were probably executed by the locals to try harvesting their Devil Fruits. After all, even unknown DFs are worth far, FAR more than their bounties were. Known, fairly powerful ones? Yep, no way that locals who jumped to try what they did on the crew didn't simply execute them to try getting the DFs...
Novus
2024-10-03 10:08:16 +0000 UTCYup, you can definitely see that this baby wasn't quite ready. Several typos spread all throughout it. That aside, THAT WAS AWESOME!!! More or less what I'd have expected for the kids' first visit to a relatively lawless port. And unlike some stories, I quite like how you're making the journey between islands take a while. It really helps drive in the fact that sea travel is a slow process. Though, hopefully, Izuku will toughen up quickly so he'll stop breaking his bones every time.
Tellemicus Sundance
2024-10-01 12:25:30 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I had been wondering at what point in the storyline they would be meeting Robin ever since you mentioned her in the poll.
Aragorn93
2024-10-01 08:38:45 +0000 UTCi want more but i have but so much voting power
Eragon Gravelyn
2024-10-01 03:52:28 +0000 UTC
