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Stallion of the Line 44

I am not Japanese… that covers both sides here.

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Remember, the Revolutionaries are acting NOW. They have been doing so for a while...

vimesenthusiast

And the family reunions will be very, very awkward...

Aaron Orr

Bonney and Ace is very uncomfortable unless she got mentally aged up from her canon 10 at this point. not sure if this has been mentioned before or things have been changed in the background or not

Mia

Also now having thought about it for awhile I kinda really hope sabo ends up with the magma fruit somehow. I just feel that it would be cool to have the three brothers all have a heat/fire themed logia DF. Plus in Canon Akainu kills ace and sabo ended up with his fruit so in this one where luffy and boa kill Akainu instead it somehow feels poetic to me that sabo ends up with Akainu's fruit

Cormag81

One of Nami's mikan become the Gura Gura no Mi....

Aaron Orr

🤔. Maybe Garp. We will have to see on that score

vimesenthusiast

Insert my evil cackle here.

vimesenthusiast

I'm interested how Shanks and the Revolutionaries will be handled due all that change and reveal of the Gorosei's powers!

Hiryo

Yeah, I'm glad this arc is finally over. As awesome and imaginative as it was, it's nice that we'll finally be moving on. Now, onto the aftermath! I wonder what'll become of some of the characters. Ace, Hina, and the Whitebeards in general. To say nothing of how the rest of the world will react!

Tellemicus Sundance

awesome chapter. My only question is if anyone will retrieve whitebeards body and weapon. In canon, the whitebeard crew were able to bury him with his weapon thanks to Shank's intervention. Will Ruffy, Shiki, or anyone else swoop in for it?

Curiosity44

The devil fruit issue is one I will need to handle carefully. Hina might be able to go bounty hunter for a bit, but only so long as the Marines don’t hear about her. Makino a DF? Hmmm….🧐

vimesenthusiast

How the hell did you read my mind before I even read this chapter?! I concur, a full reread is certainly in my future. Don't need Kenbunshoku to predict that!

FormVIEnthusiast

1. Immediate. 2. Political. 3.Geographic. 4. Personal.

vimesenthusiast

An excellent chapter. Ill be looking forward to the aftermath

Bryan Brown

The fruits can be as well on Impel Down and others, was also a reason why they have the trees there.

Hiryo

god i love this chapter and this fic!

Gilorad

Gotta admit, even if this fight seemed to go on almost as long as a Dragonball Z grunting match, the ending was spectacular. You did a MUCH better job giving Whitebeard a proper send off than canon did. Though I 100% don't envy you trying to sort out the aftermath. This is a pretty staggering change to the balance of power. Possibly the most drastic diversion to a canon timeline you've written in any fic...

Novus

It's a good question, though. A LOT of Devil Fruit users all just died in a relatively small area. Statically, there are probably quite a few devil fruits appearing all over the surviving ships. Given Eve is one of the most intact, odds are fairly good at least one would appear on it. More on the White Beard ships, and the fewest on the Marine ships, since they've been wrecked the worst.

Novus

No pressure just thought "wow we have at least one major logia confirmed dead and the last two times that happened luffy somehow ended up with the fruit wonder if that's happening again." However considering Moria, Kuma, and any of Moria's minions with DF who went down with the ship didn't have their fruits recovered it's not like we need to know where every DF ends up

Cormag81

That was fantastic. You did the war of the best proud.

Lictor Magnus

Thank you so much for the chapter. Such a great ending to an epic arc. What’s going to happen to Hina now? She going to be a pirate or bounty hunter? How many devil fruits are the straw hats going to get with this. ending. I hope that Makino finally gets a fruit that matches her skills.

Alain Icasiano

Great climax. At this point canon has shattered so much, the ride is going to get wilder.

John W

God damn, what an impressive old man. Still managed to take a Gorosei to Davy Jones even 3/4's dead. This has been a heart stopper of a battle....night need to do a full reread😁

Orchamus

I was disappointed when Stallion wasn't updated last month, but this chapter was worth the wait. Excellent job!

Aragorn93

I like to think it's what a lot of my fics do best.

vimesenthusiast

OOOOH... hmm... HMm... That, that is an angle I had not considered. Oof.

vimesenthusiast

Absolutely amazing. The end of an age and the last stand of a true man. This is everything that I hoped it could be and I can't wait for the next chapter to see how the world reacts. PS how much fruit is there on eve right now :P

Cormag81

An epic end to both a character, a battle, a chapter, and an arc. This story will always be one that I’ll vote for and each chapter you post validates that choice. Thank you for this chapter and story!

Flbiv

Gods, what a fucking ride.. Did not disappoint in the slightest. That said, it's been such a long fucking arc it's a relief that it's done. Holy shit did you fucking shake things up though.

Primordial Vortex


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