Magic of the Force 25
Added 2024-08-31 06:07:31 +0000 UTCI am not British nor affiliated with Darth Mous
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Ah. I was going from memory, doing a quick look back, there are other variations. Terran at least once right in the first few paragraphs for example. I think there might have been one or two others. Terrance was just the one that repeated enough to stick in my head. Sorry, I was/am reading on my phone atm, so I couldn't mark them done as I went -_-.
Novus
2024-09-02 05:23:55 +0000 UTCokay, seen and corrected. Even if... well... in the true canon, Sly was one of Sidious's mistresses... so... accurate in a way?
vimesenthusiast
2024-09-02 04:02:32 +0000 UTCHuh... only found three Terrance, wouldn't call that virtually all LOL. Also only found one Georgia. Should have been George, as that is what I used when writing that scene with Dragon Naturally Speaking. I will wait to post the chapter until going over it again tommorow. And come to think of it, some people over on Primordial Vortex's discord point out mistakes occassionally Yes on Thyfferra
vimesenthusiast
2024-09-02 04:01:27 +0000 UTCLots and LOTS of errors throughout. Like virtually all mentions of Thyferra being Terrance. Lots of name replacers are off too. Gilad's was messed up several times in particular. That said, errors aside, it was a good chapter. It got things moving again a bit, Zule finally joins (yay!), and the consequences of Thyferra changing are going to create some interesting snowballs.
Novus
2024-09-02 02:18:26 +0000 UTCI had not read it, but this sounds just plain wrong to me: Pasting on his Palpatine expression for a few moments, he sent a message to **his** Sly that
lostone2
2024-09-01 08:40:03 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter . Mace doesn't seem the force ghost type to me so i would only have him show up if Anakin does a vision quest of some sort.
Bryan Brown
2024-09-01 03:04:34 +0000 UTC... Now that, is a secret, LOL.
vimesenthusiast
2024-08-31 18:07:39 +0000 UTCAs always enjoyable. I hope Thrawn continues to note the oddities in his own thought patterns, and is able to cone to an appropriate conclusion. As much as I like him as an antagonist, I like him as a good guy more.
Questara
2024-08-31 17:45:53 +0000 UTC
