Stallion of the Line 43
Added 2024-05-31 19:32:45 +0000 UTCI can’t draw and am not Japanese.
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Late comment, but I personally think that Hina having to become a sort of Sword substitute for X-Drake would be interesting, using the 'betrayal' she has committed if cooler heads prevail. Though a) it would be her joining under Luffy's flag, and b) it would be less about sabotage and more pointing the crew in the direction of the other Yonko. This seems possible considering Sword is strictly Marines iirc. Plus her awakening her powers could be interesting, especially if she figures out how to do more than just plain iron traps.
Joseph Klos
2024-06-21 03:02:22 +0000 UTCI think the Yonko part is just him declaring certain Island under his protection, and that attacking them will result in his direct response. Which is what Yonko do, but he just showed being able to fight their admirals. Assault their (not-so)inescapable prison and talking with Whitebeard as an equal. But honestly it's still Ranma, and the fact that this pisses of Marine/WG would be enough of reason for him to tell that directly to their faces anyway :-D
Tomon
2024-06-07 11:41:04 +0000 UTC"Give us your flag, we'll give you our princess" kind of offers going forward? :-D
Tomon
2024-06-07 11:35:24 +0000 UTCI think it was a great chapter! I have two things I'd like to point out though. The first is that I don't remember anyone saying anything about Jinbei joining the crew yet. Then I think Nami started saying something like Jinbei would be joining them, as if it didn't need to be addressed. I don't think he was even officially introduced to the rest of the crew. The same thing happened with Vivi later in the chapter. She mentioned putting Alabasta under Luffy's protection, but neither of them talked about joining the crew. I think it was Sanji that made it seem like it was already official. That's the first thing. The second is that Luffy telling the World Government to make him an emperor seems kind of pretentious. I'm pretty sure this isn't elaborated on in canon, but I always pictured the Yonkos as having been given that title after they started claiming islands and making names for themselves. Essentially just the Gorosei telling the Marines, "Don't mess with any of these four groups without asking us first." I don't think any of them asked to be named Yonko. Luffy declaring himself a yonko just seems to me like he's demanding that the World Government see him as important and threatening. I believe he should just start claiming islands and the Yonko title will come.
Aragorn93
2024-06-04 03:11:02 +0000 UTCYeah, sorry about that. I can’t decide where the downloads are shown…
vimesenthusiast
2024-06-04 01:13:01 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Love how you are covering every base and every front. Some characters die, others live, but that's war. I would not worry about further editing as the only obvious mistakes I've seen are some missing quotation marks (tough to point out) and misnaming Amazon Lily to Kuja Lily a few times. A simple find and replace should fix it. Finally, a personal request. I'm not sure if you can or not, but is there a possibility to place the doc links at the top of the post? Or even in a comment after a new release. Using my phone, it took me a good minute to scroll all the way down to find the attachments lol
Bub3loka
2024-06-03 22:16:34 +0000 UTCTrue on Nami. Peter... nope. He has other priorities.
vimesenthusiast
2024-06-02 17:32:17 +0000 UTCEhh... you're thinking like a normal person. Ranma ain't normal. HIs ability to think ahead isn't all that good, nor is it automatic. He'd heard good things of Tsuru up until the Three Shichi ambush, and knew Garp was a friend of hers. Thus he let her go. I don't think I will have the Green Goo have that negative a response. Some kind of wasting exhuastion after a set amount of time could be possible. Depends on if I want to... well, that would be telling. I am not done yet... the events of this war, large and small are going to ROCK the world.
vimesenthusiast
2024-06-02 17:26:08 +0000 UTCNami has spent about ten years trying to save her island so she will be super worried about it and her sister Since Peter places immense value on mythical fruits, he will surely try to kill Katarina Devon
GreedOnGreed
2024-06-02 16:18:43 +0000 UTCThanks. As stated I will hopefully be going over T and H’s versions tomorrow
vimesenthusiast
2024-05-31 23:15:38 +0000 UTCPoor Tsuru, firing off that last shot at Raffy is going to have some interesting long term consequences for her in Coby.
Matthew VanderBurgh
2024-05-31 22:06:07 +0000 UTCCheck discord. I screenshotted a bunch of error/weird segments
Primordial Vortex
2024-05-31 21:50:29 +0000 UTCGod I love this fic so much. Vivi's brain frying when she saw luffy made me cackle like a maniac.
Primordial Vortex
2024-05-31 21:50:01 +0000 UTCFirst off, thanks for the chapter. You do great work as always. But really, outside of some future plot point for you as the writer, i see absolutely no reason Luffy, Hancock, or Vivi would let Tsuru leave like that. She's the #1 enemy you don't want to let get away cuz she's gonna fuck you over in the future. Unless you decide on some plot like the WG has some ability to brainwash marines like Sengoku and Tsuru into being eviler than they should have been, she should have died. Not even being Garps old friend should have saved her with everything she has done and is capable of doing. Besides that, loved the events. Akainu getting crippled is icing on the cake. I'm also interested to see what the consequences of marines using green goop is. I can't see that being healthy in the long run for them. Would be nice if everyone who used it gets cripples some of their combat potential after the war is over at least.
Curiosity44
2024-05-31 21:42:07 +0000 UTCnow for the great question: by how many meters do sea levels rise when Imu hears the news?
Patrick McDonald Meteer
2024-05-31 20:35:01 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter, and I'm happy it looks like Vivi is going to join the relationship long term. Though I wonder what it will do to Raffy's reputation that both islands that fly his flag have residents that are in a romantic relationship with him.
Karnath
2024-05-31 20:26:26 +0000 UTC
