Magic of the Force 23
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Great chapter. I think the pirmary reason not many Jedi died in space battles in cannon is I can not recall more than 1 or 2 times a jedi was shown on captial ships during a fight. Ussally they were in a star fighter and with the force warning them to doge lock-ons before the enemy pulls the triger, not very vunerable even if the jedi in question was only an average pilot.
Bryan Brown
2024-02-27 17:28:06 +0000 UTCHmm... Okay, I can put in a small scene I think, we will see. Sick. Lost voice. typing DA. Not having fun. Hope everyone else is in my stead.
vimesenthusiast
2024-02-20 15:30:26 +0000 UTCReally great chapter though I agree with tigger42 a little that the early parts of the chapter drag a bit. For me I think that was because of the dramatic irony of us knowing the TB was on the way so we spent the entire first half of the space battle knowing that help was on the way. Maybe if it cut away to a snippet from Harry's perspective planning the jump in or something like that to break up the looming sense of when is harry going to show up. Overall a great chapter despite that
Cormag81
2024-02-12 22:57:26 +0000 UTC
