Effect of a Horse and a Dragon Chapter 8
Added 2024-01-21 19:09:22 +0000 UTCHow do everybody. Damn it, the Pack lost last n
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How do you find the older chapters
Trent
2024-01-30 04:11:20 +0000 UTCEh, I dislike summarizing events that take so long. Admittedly, the Herb portions might have dragged, but I thought the Ranma segments were decent. I wanted to show that the Blood Pack would be coming after Ranma, and I wanted to show him getting along with Garrus, who will be a recurring secondary character. As for the ending, well... heh. Adventures often come suddenly, and then consider: while Ranma and Herb's bodies might be unconscious, their ki healing will keep working. All those things Tela used on them, they will both soon be immune too...
vimesenthusiast
2024-01-22 03:13:25 +0000 UTCEh, not a fan of how it ended and honestly the whole chapter felt like dull filler. It basically amounted to 'yay, Omega has a government now that we have no actual details of. Oh and Morinth is dead.' Ranma and Herb didn't progress in any way. None of the major cast were developed, and no significant plot really happened. Honestly, the only interesting thing was what Benezia was up to. Excluding Samara's fight and Benezia:s bit, I think you could probably have replaced the rest of this with two or three paragraphs of summary and accomplished exactly the same thing.
Novus
2024-01-22 02:07:59 +0000 UTC
