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Christmas present Part 2

Ranma/Kuroinu Crossover: A Young Ranma’

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I like what you have done here and having Ranma at just twelve but well into the unimpeded throes of puberty can make for more possibilities than the controlled older Ranma of canon - particularly in this world. So long as what develops between Ranma and Olga is based upon genuine growing affection and not just a means of manipulation, it can make for a good relationship to have grow as part of the story. Also given the effects that ki control can have upon extending human life by centuries combined with magic, there is nothing preventing Ranma from being around for centuries as Olga's consort. Thank you for the Christmas gift. I hope you continue this one as well.

Travis G

I mean, there could be options here. The Goddess who transports Ranma could de-age him. And Nerima age Ranma is what 16? Even if you threw him in there at that age, you then have the angle to work with where Genma managed to hit Ranma's pressure points that he was trying to hit here. And you can then have his disinterest be a thing to work on. The other thing is that the Nerima version of Ranma is more trained up and could have access to ki and stuff. Makes him much more of a force to deal with the problems that could emerge further on. Also, young Ranma's age is making me feel just a tad iffy here. Older Ranma is MUCH more Chaos personified like the Goddess was looking to insert into Eos as well.

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