King of Champions 9
Added 2023-08-29 13:25:50 +0000 UTCGive it up for Daniel, who got
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Great chapter! I am wondering if the Schnees are undermining Evig Laga more because they are a competitor, or because of their stance on faunus. They do have a well earned reputation in that area. I do realize that it will mean putting Harry in a very tough situation, but I am hoping this will force him to show off and experiment more with his magic.
Beleriond
2023-09-04 06:10:07 +0000 UTCMinor error near the end of the chapter. Arturia names "Coco Chanel". Unless this is an AU point or nickname, her name is Coco Adel. It is somewhat appropriate to confuse her with the founder of the Chanel brand.
R Brown
2023-09-03 07:50:33 +0000 UTC
