ATPFInal
Added 2023-06-25 13:50:41 +0000 UTCHey all. Sorry it took me so long to post this.
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Well done, I'm honestly surprised you managed to wrangle a universe as large, confusing, and downright chaotic as Marvel is, all without losing either your muse or your mind before the end. I honestly think that if every other author in either the HP or Marvel fandoms tried writing this sort of story, you would still be one of only a handful to actually finish, let alone making it this far. I certainly would've run out of steam and material before the first fight with Magneto. Minor things I noticed: Thanos is still in here as the name you use in DNS (Saren or some such), Carol seems to have popped into Cap's relationship, and near the end of the chapter there were a few instances where DNS turned normal words into names (mostly in the wedding sequence of the top of my head.) Great work, and I will watch your (continuing) career with great interest, young Skywalker!
FormVIEnthusiast
2025-01-08 09:44:09 +0000 UTCI am surprised that we did. It get to see the space battle or fight with Thanos. I really felt that after everything we would have received it. There is almost like a chapter missing from 54 to final. It also would have been great or know the butcher’s bill of the Thanos invasion. Overall I am glad the story is now finished as it has been something I have re-read many times and been constant in my life for a long time. Thank you
Garri Sarkisov
2023-08-04 17:06:23 +0000 UTCwill there be a complete story file soon?
Alec Fowler
2023-07-01 16:27:25 +0000 UTCThank you for the enjoyable stories and all the dedication you put into seeing them through. Both a happy and sad occasion to see stories reach their conclusion but coming to a set ending is always preferable to simply fading away.
sg
2023-06-30 07:45:35 +0000 UTCHonestly feels weird this being finished after reading it for so many years but congrats on getting it done , dont mean to come across as critical but i do agree with you the thanos and harry conflict could have been better the chapter was good it just seemed like harry coming in at the end was rushed and only included to justify his titan ritual, also the epilogue seemed short and sorta rushed aswell with some loose ends that the editing will adress like gamora and did natasha and boom boom make it or not etc also i'm probably wrong but wasnt steve with betsy&polaris not betsy&carol that being one of the reasons alex left could be wrong with that i admit, sorry if it comes across as me being shitty about your work i dont mean it that way ,i have enjoyed reading this story and rereading it over the years and cant wait to read more updates for your other fics.
Jamie Celtic
2023-06-27 01:52:37 +0000 UTCAnd so this 10 year journey finally comes to a conclusion, well done on seeing it through to the end.
idk
2023-06-26 23:14:40 +0000 UTCThank you very much for all that. It was a wonderful story and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Thank you again.
zagan
2023-06-26 11:06:43 +0000 UTCHmm, a bit rough, but it's all stuff that's pure editing issues, rather than anything being wrong with the story! I admit I've been sort of just waiting for this one to finally end so you can get on with other stuff for a while, as my Marvel interest sort of died out a while back. On the other hand...I'm pretty sure this was actually the very first one of your fics I ever read. Which has kept me reading it, so I could see it through to the end. It may also be the single most ambitious fic I've ever seen actually finished. Though if you ever finish Magic of the Force that might outstrip it ambition wise (though maybe not size wise!), given the sheer difference in scope between the two universes. Anyway! As I just said in a comment for Horse of the Force...thanks for all the years of great storytelling with with this! Even if I sort of burned out on it nearer to the end, it was an amazing story...and one of the few fanfictions I've actually gone back and reread multiple times because I enjoyed it so much. Now go make even more amazing stuff ;-)! P.S. My younger self called in and forced me to add a PS about it being a little disappointing we'll never get a Hela lemon, though ;-).
Novus
2023-06-26 09:49:40 +0000 UTCWell done good sir it's been one hell of a ride reading all of ATP and Horse I enjoyed them both and I look forward to reading the rest of your current works, and newer in good time
Elias
2023-06-26 02:21:35 +0000 UTCA few loose ends left, but I did quite enjoy this. The wedding was well done. Sincerely, thank you for this story. It's been a lot of fun. I look forward to you updating some of your stories that have been on hiatus now that two of your largest stories are done.
Beleriond
2023-06-25 18:17:07 +0000 UTCA wonderful end to a wonderful story. Well done! And yes, the extensive world building in a setting such as Marvel? A mistake for sure, the MCU is still ongoing to this day and you started this years ago. Chaos ensues. Still, you've done an admirable job of it. Keep up the Awesome.
Razgriz0x
2023-06-25 16:59:58 +0000 UTCOh my god. It's over? FINALLY!!!
Tellemicus Sundance
2023-06-25 15:02:43 +0000 UTC
