Horse For the Force Final
Added 2023-06-20 03:18:06 +0000 UTCHello everyone! Happy Belated Father’s Day to m
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Just got back. Started to read, sorry it is coming to end - however everything ends eventually. Minor query, what comes after: It is as inevitable as my making such trouble making meatbags...
Ampws
2023-07-07 10:09:57 +0000 UTCI actually read this the day you posted it, by I've been pretty swarmed under myself so put off saying anything :-). Thankfully, you don't need to worry about me tearing anything apart this time ;-). This is actually just about the most perfect ending that could have existed, I think. I was somewhat skeptical, I admit, since I don't actually like the events of Mortis from The Clone Wars. But you did a good job handling it, it made an excellent capstone for the story...and the pay off of the Daughter finally getting her spanking was worth it's inclusion all on it's own. I remember commenting about her clear back the first time you described the Force giggling about his transformation. That was, what, probably almost eight years ago since it was near the beginning? Wow, actually saying that just makes it all the more impressive that you finally finished this monster. Even if it's dwarfed by A Third Path to the Future. Which you also just finished. I imagine it must be a hell of a relief to finally have two such long running fics wrapped up, almost on top of each other. All in all, I've enjoyed the heck out of this work for years, and I think you wrapped it up amazingly well. Thanks for the years of amazing reading :-)!
Novus
2023-06-26 09:40:18 +0000 UTC
