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Added 2023-02-12 22:21:04 +0000 UTCI don’t own JKR, nor would I ever think
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Hi, I was reading and editing when I came across this paragraph: There, they had a picnic, debating once more on whether or not they should head north right away, as in follow the Misty Mountains up words, or had to Erebor first, and then straight north from there. Or even if they should do that at all. While Harry was interested to see what I streak was like, and perhaps hunt down some of these beasts of Morgoth. He was equally interested in Gondor and Rohan, the two best known human nations that existed up on middle Earth. Fact that there were only two such still disturbed Harry a bit, that the remnants of Beleriand had not evolved into a country again beyond the shire was strange. But nonetheless, Harry did want to see Rohan and Gondor. What on Earth does 'I streak' mean? It makes no sense. I mean I can see you meant 'or head' in 'or had'. Whatever program you are using for editing is doing you no favours. I am having to make changes to the text to actually get it to read correctly. I actually stopped using Dragon speech to text because it caused so many problems back in the day. Grammerly seems to cause nearly as many problems it seems.
Ampws
2023-04-04 17:06:25 +0000 UTCI know it's an error, but the image conjured by this sentence was amazing: “It is often harder to turn away from power than use it. I could indeed use that power to do great food." I couldn't help but immediately imagine a serious-faced Galadriel in the middle of an anime-style cooking contest. Declaring a special cooking maneuver that used Neyna for the power of amazing tastes... --- Amusing errors aside, it was a good chapter. I didn't see the issues with the brain changes coming, but they make sense...sort of? The human mind is technically already capable of near perfect memory and has enough storage capacity to essentially never run out. It's the neutral connections that get lost. You never ACTUALLY forget something, you just lose the mental 'address' of where the memory is stored. Or, such is my understanding. Either way, that was a fun diversion. And I REALLY like your version of Galadriel. I think you're doing an amazing job with her.
Novus
2023-02-15 06:20:56 +0000 UTC
