Climbing Together Chapter 5
Added 2022-12-31 19:56:06 +0000 UTCHey all, here is my last present of the year. I
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Ouch. but I did mention that no one had seen it before I posted it. Hiryo does his best, but he is more about Ranma knowledge than anything else. I will try to Grammarly my work myself, but this was very much a rush job.
vimesenthusiast
2023-01-04 22:45:58 +0000 UTCHappy New Year! Sadly, this chapter doesn't bode well for a new year's outlook. Though there weren't any real grammar errors, it is very easy to see that this chapter was written via that 'speech to writing' thing you're so into, as well as the strong implication that your backup readers were VERY lax in their duties. It was kind of a chore reading this one as a result. I still enjoyed the ironic twist at the end with Soun being captured. It just wasn't as enjoyable as it otherwise could've been.
Tellemicus Sundance
2023-01-04 15:49:27 +0000 UTCHappy New Year
shaun shultz
2022-12-31 23:36:16 +0000 UTC
