Bhaalson Remodel Chapter 12
Added 2022-12-25 02:36:05 +0000 UTCMEERRY Christmas! Alas, the Eagles lost
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I'm honestly kinda glad that Branwen is dead, she brought next to nothing to the party and her death can be used as as a plot device for motivation really well.
Doubledoor
2023-02-21 10:58:45 +0000 UTCWoohoo! Awesome Christmas present! Needs to serious editing help (there are a lot of incorrect names, where you used one name but meant someone else. Among other things. Like incorrectly identifying Jaheira as a fighter in her system block. But! The actual story developments.are awesome! And you squeezed quite a bit in!
Novus
2022-12-26 03:08:40 +0000 UTC
