King of Champions 6
Added 2022-12-19 05:12:50 +0000 UTCHappy (belated) Hanukk
Comments
Lovely chapter, even if I'm reading up on the patreon only stuff now. Was the gift for Guld a homage to the dancing alien joke from Spaceballs? Now I have "Hello my Honey, Hello my Baby" stuck in my head!
FormVIEnthusiast
2024-06-22 22:55:19 +0000 UTCAnother excellent and entertaining chapter, thanks
Christian Jeffress
2023-01-30 08:46:43 +0000 UTCYou wrote that Harry scratched his lightning scar but he doesn't have it in this world. I enjoyed the battle of Artoria and I hope the ARGT breaks down because I don't like Appacci. Does the mine contain fire dust because it is located near a volcano?
GreedOnGreed
2022-12-20 22:55:24 +0000 UTCThe new settlement needs to get some stealthy drones with cameras to do some scouting. For that matter, they also need a ship or two with guns. Even if they can't use them all the time due to flying Grimm, but it'd be useful enough some oof the time.
sandmanwake
2022-12-20 05:10:12 +0000 UTCi liked the chapter, the date was a lot of fun and good character growth, and i'm enjoying the slow disintegration of ARGT but now i'm actually rooting for Sung-Sun and Tia to both stick around because i'm starting to like her character. and the Arturia segment was good, it didn't run on too long and actually felt significant because it showed off the success of Harry's mine expansion
Delphinous
2022-12-20 01:40:32 +0000 UTCFor the record, when you posted your questions a few days ago, I voted that I would rather see more Team training then Arturia dealing with Grimm. I was wrong. The Arturia section was awesome, and it would have been a horrible shame to miss out on it. I love the idea that this was the first step to creating a warrior culture in Evig Laga and seeing it firsthand like that gave a much clearer impression of how it happened then a quick summary afterward would have. I think what you’ve done with Evig Laga in general has been amazing, and I’m really excited to see where it goes.
Scott
2022-12-19 23:46:15 +0000 UTCNice chapter
Bryan Brown
2022-12-19 23:34:38 +0000 UTCThat, plus a bit of a puppy thrown in, she likes hugs and cuddles
vimesenthusiast
2022-12-19 22:25:52 +0000 UTCseen and corrected. And now I hope I willget comments about the content of the chapter rather than just the mistakes!!!!
vimesenthusiast
2022-12-19 15:36:45 +0000 UTCcorrected
vimesenthusiast
2022-12-19 15:26:17 +0000 UTCMy imagine of Tia in my head is a cutesy combination of Tia Harribel and Mysterious Heroine X (Alter)
JCFenton
2022-12-19 11:31:29 +0000 UTCAs mentioned you posted the chapter twice. Over all great chapter and I didn't notice nearly as many mistakes as last chapter, only two that I can recall clearly. First when Harry is teasing Pyrrha about making dinner in just an apron you had Pyrrha think of him as Harry Potter instead of Harry Arc. Second somewhere in the ARVN + Tia combat training section Ren was called Robert or Robin I can't remember exactly but it started with 'Ro' that I do remember.
Megaslayer321a
2022-12-19 08:02:18 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter, one thing that stuck out that I didn’t see mentioned yet was that you called Ren, Robert.
Benjamin Bravo
2022-12-19 07:13:36 +0000 UTCThere are also two points where you call Sung-Sun Sarah, as well as calling the townhouse a town hall during the date. I also remember a couple of other mistakes, but those are the specific ones I can remember off the top of my head.
Karnath
2022-12-19 07:05:41 +0000 UTCcorrected, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2022-12-19 07:01:52 +0000 UTCseen and corrected, thanks. Patreon being a bitch tonight for some reason.
vimesenthusiast
2022-12-19 07:01:43 +0000 UTCMmmm..... haven't finished the chapter yet, but I noticed the name Harry Potter showing up again.
Liedral
2022-12-19 06:57:55 +0000 UTCYou accidentally doubled the chapter.
Karnath
2022-12-19 05:19:04 +0000 UTC
