Stallion35
Added 2022-08-01 03:34:48 +0000 UTCAin’t Japanese.
Hey all, sorry this took
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First thing first! I really love that Gion is here! I can see her acting like a Javert to Raffy's Valjean better than Hina! (And I'm really fan of Hina xD) So I'm really looking forward to the unavoiable fight between them! Ranma being more open about this emotions and in general **talking** is something I really like in general about your Ranma crossovers, but here, in his talk with Hancock? It was perfect! Plus, I really love the dynamic between the three of them, so really looking forwards to more Robin/Hancock interactions, being them romantic or purely platonic or something between them~? Irrelevant! I just know it's gonna be amusing~ Zoro vs Law was funny, but hoooooly shit, I forgot how petty Law can be at times. I'm really looking for the next chapter! This arc is looking like it's gonna be short, sweet and really packed with action and shaking revelations (for the Marines and the fossilized boy-band 5Elder★). I can barely wait for poor, dear Tsuru's reaction, specially if Sengoku and/or Garp are in the same room when she gets the news! Thank you very much for the chapter! (And hope you're feeling better!!)
Reiter
2022-08-22 15:54:47 +0000 UTCI will add the downloadable version when Tomon, Hiryo and I are finished the full chapter.
vimesenthusiast
2022-08-10 01:32:01 +0000 UTCWere you able to get a download file for this for those of us who are not able to read it all in one sitting?
Zachrey Mueller
2022-08-09 18:28:52 +0000 UTCsorry for replying to your post nicholas despite not being the author- big takeaway is that Kizaru is lazy, and the logic of the One Piece world generally takes precedence over what we know about IRL physics; that, and it's a story- the only rules that it needs to hold to are those that are internal to it and, in the case of fanfiction, its source material.
Patrick McDonald Meteer
2022-08-07 21:11:56 +0000 UTChe is kicking at the speed of light, with a foot made out of light- combine that with anime logic and it sort of balances things out such that it doesn't constantly result in nuclear level island shattering kicks. that, and he has probably been holding back somewhat, as his thing of 'unclear justice' plus lazyness very much holds true each and every single time we've seen him- save for maybe, just maybe, at marineford.
Patrick McDonald Meteer
2022-08-07 21:08:56 +0000 UTCIt doesn't look like you're keeping the confrontation with kizaru in here, but I have a theory about him. Either he's been holding back every time we've seen him, or he has yet to unlock his full power. Despite his claims of kicking at the speed of light, such an attack should have have an effect closer to that of a nuke going off.
Aragorn93
2022-08-07 00:14:45 +0000 UTCShe is going to be with Nami and her group. She isn't as well known (no canon bounty) so no need to give her a disguise.
vimesenthusiast
2022-08-05 17:25:46 +0000 UTCAfter re-reading this a random thought crossed my mind... I know she isn't officially in the crew yet, but where is Perona in all this?
Daniel Neil
2022-08-05 16:26:37 +0000 UTCYeah. sorry, got sick after losing a full weekend to other RL things. No chance I could finish the chapter in time to let Tomon see it.
vimesenthusiast
2022-08-03 03:23:31 +0000 UTCthe last he already has a hint of and will start to grasp during the coming campaign. one of the others he will learn from Rayliegh, not both. that will keep things more natural and flowing.
vimesenthusiast
2022-08-02 22:53:42 +0000 UTCugh to read or wait for the full version.. hard choices
Tom smith
2022-08-02 12:08:30 +0000 UTCis is going to be via Rayleigh? or is it going to be via encountering it in Marineford and the New World?
Patrick McDonald Meteer
2022-08-02 03:02:25 +0000 UTCthis is very good. what are your plans around Raffy(Ranma/Luffy) learning the advanced forms of haki? (foresight, armamament flow, and the advanced forms of conquerer's haki- mainly using it to coat your weapons)
Patrick McDonald Meteer
2022-08-02 03:00:43 +0000 UTCmore please
ibraha01
2022-08-01 08:56:20 +0000 UTC
