Fate 16
Added 2022-03-28 19:13:30 +0000 UTCAnd here is the edited version folks. No excus
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800 and some change yeah. Hopefully they have all been corrected now.
vimesenthusiast
2022-03-31 11:54:46 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, quite a few grammatical errors that could use polishing though.
Levi Cook
2022-03-29 16:07:49 +0000 UTCThe world building chapters are always very entertaining for me to read, and I love the amount of thought and detail you put into them. I also really love the transfiguration Harry Potter did to the mountain, and that he will always have a home to return to, especially with Tauriel. It’s also good that money won’t be a very large concern for him, so that he can focus on other matters of interest for himself as well. One thing I’d rather hope he can figure out, it may be managing to make a flying broom for himself. I think the reactions of everyone who sees that would be rather hilarious lol. I am also very excited for what he will be able to learn as time goes on, such as Dwarven runes, maybe some healing from Elrond, and especially whatever he can learn from Galadriel. From what I understand and with my shallow knowledge on Lord of the rings, she has an astonishing amount of knowledge in regards to magic. Lastly, I admit to being rather curious if there will be a battle between Harry Potter and Durin’s Bane, because that would be one hell of a fight. Overall, absolutely loving the direction and detail involved in the entirety of the story, how his relationship with Ariel is developing, and the friendships she is making in this new life of his. Incredibly entertaining to read and always excited to read more of this world you are developing.
Christian Jeffress
2022-03-29 02:16:41 +0000 UTC
