Stallion of the Line 31
Added 2022-01-01 06:00:24 +0000 UTCHey all, here is the (Possibly) Final version.
Comments
Are there a lot of changes to make it worth it to be read again?
BlainX
2022-01-17 15:10:03 +0000 UTCThanks for chapter! Two mistake: Hancock says Dragon, not Luffy. And "anyreason". Does Ranma remember that Hancock has to be alive to get Robin back? P.S. Luffy/Robin/Hancok great pairing ;)
Evgeniy Kazanin
2022-01-17 09:02:41 +0000 UTCNow updated ;)
Hiryo
2022-01-17 06:16:28 +0000 UTCStill temp. Wait for Sunday
vimesenthusiast
2022-01-15 07:44:40 +0000 UTCIs this still the temp chapter or it is already updated?
Konan2020
2022-01-15 04:09:32 +0000 UTCRanma is always down for learning more fighting styles :) Even if this Luffy version got quite enough on his plate with Haki, DF and such :)
Tomon
2022-01-09 03:47:10 +0000 UTCPoor Absalom, right? Not only his marriage attempts always falls through. Not only he needs to run away from Lola zombie... But now he is even ship material :-D Definitely a mistake and should be fixed in final version ;-)
Tomon
2022-01-09 03:45:31 +0000 UTCExtreme beat downs... Yep. Oh yep.
vimesenthusiast
2022-01-03 16:03:43 +0000 UTCGood chapter! Not a lot of plot to cover since this was an action chapter, plus this is a Ranma/One Piece x-over, so plot was never the point, LOL. I do hope that Ranma isn't going to kill Boa at least. Moria I'm fine with, and Kuma I don't know enough about to feel one way or the other. Boa however could be a good ally, I'd also really like to see how the Amazons react to Ranma's transformation. I am really looking forward to Ranma kicking some butt in his Logia form. Have you ever read the later chapters of Mahou Sensei Negima? The MC is a martial-artist wizard that can also fully transform his body into lightning if you wanted some inspiration. On a side-note, will Ranma learn Fishman Karate? It is a new style of martial arts so he would definitely be interested. The ability to control water is more of a bonus, but could effectively counter other Devil Fruit users. It would probably be limited to Ranma's female form of course.
Beleriond
2022-01-03 04:20:34 +0000 UTCMoria knows about Zoro's sense of direction? Hahaha... I hope Oz received the full curse of the Lost Boy? hahahaha Damn, what a cliffhanger. Here's hoping Ranma had trained and thought of many many lightning technique. Also, Soul of Ice and the Senken? Didn't he also have the Dragon Ascending moves and its variant, which he hasn't used?
Doraemax
2022-01-02 13:13:41 +0000 UTCdamn that was some beautiful suspense and imaginative fighting. felt like i could stay in tune with them all the way. I'm really hoping for some extreme beat downs in the next chapter as Luffy truly lets loose. i've been waiting so long to see the true godlike powers of that fruit put to use. Enel could do some insane things with it.
Curiosity44
2022-01-02 03:02:50 +0000 UTCYes, though my plans have changed on who make up the polycule have changed several times.
vimesenthusiast
2022-01-02 00:12:28 +0000 UTCQuick question, isn’t their ship made of Adam wood, not Absalom wood? It looks like you used Absalom in place of several words in this chapter.
Eraser279
2022-01-01 19:30:12 +0000 UTCWhat a way to start the year!!
Reiter
2022-01-01 17:22:24 +0000 UTCawesome chapter mate! really well done!
Gilorad
2022-01-01 09:21:18 +0000 UTCDamn! What a chapter! Luffy at the end there though... Moira and Kuma are so screwed lol. I don'T know what you plan to do with Boa, but I hope she survives. I can't remember, were you doing a multi pairing for Ranma/Luffy in this story?
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
2022-01-01 08:56:37 +0000 UTCAs always great work, eager to see the final product, and super eager to see how this arc ends, I hope Boa doesn't die, but I don't think you will kill her off anyway she has too much potential to be another recurring rival/ally similar to Hina.
Megaslayer321a
2022-01-01 07:45:09 +0000 UTC
