Stallion of the Line 29
Added 2021-11-01 02:28:22 +0000 UTCTired, must force myself onward to FILFy. Noth
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Sure there are other ways like from below storage or perhaps pantry or the residential deck way; but considering you directly mention starting at the main deck and going through the conning tower entrance and stairs, I don't think that fits. Maybe if you took Raffy and the girls through the alternate stairs at the front of the ship and come back around to sneak up on sanji sure, the main stairs spiraling up the mast are too obvious. As is, it still feels more like an error.
Joseph Klos
2021-11-01 16:34:36 +0000 UTCseen and corrected, thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2021-11-01 16:22:22 +0000 UTCYeah, Eve will have a new look. As for the other, the kitchen has multiple entrances.
vimesenthusiast
2021-11-01 16:19:57 +0000 UTCOne small edit... Franky says "Quantity over Quality" at one point early on... that should be reversed in context. Further down you have Eve saying she would give Brook something to be scarred about when he hasn't introduced himself yet
Daniel Neil
2021-11-01 11:30:30 +0000 UTCFun chapter and a little more solid info for my efforts for at least getting a basic framework for Everlasting Resolve, but there was a moment in the tease attempt against sanji; you wrote them going up from the deck to see sanji and ranma retreating down; from prior descriptions, that way is the bridge/helm. You need to reverse it for going down to the kitchen and retreat up. Also looking forward to what feels like Eve's new look once she pops back out...
Joseph Klos
2021-11-01 06:24:30 +0000 UTC
