Sword, Bow, and Horse Chapter 11
Added 2021-10-19 00:47:15 +0000 UTCHey all, so here is the next chapter of Sword,
Comments
I specially like how you have managed Ranma's angst. In these kind of situations, it's a pretty think line between brushing over it as it didn't happen and the authors recreating themselves over the guilt of the MC. In that sense, you really humanize this version of Ranma and differentiate from other versions (Horse of the Force comes to mind, for instance).
lostone2
2021-10-21 09:30:54 +0000 UTCThat was a great ending for the Brune Arc and the idea to push the demons into new heights is good. I think they didn´t got enough credits in the Novel. That Ranma is going to Lim and Tina is a given and I am looking forward to his new adventures, even if we have to wait till MW is finished. The use of Mila sofar was a bit forced I think, but lets see where the story will go. Also if I remember correctly there was a big pirate battle on the ocean there Tigre got lost and Sasha died. It would be nice to see how a fully healed Vanadis would deal with them.
Niva
2021-10-20 18:22:14 +0000 UTC
