Making Waves 33
Added 2021-07-24 01:07:40 +0000 UTCHey, all, here is the next chapter of
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just finished another re-read of this amazing story. I can't believe it's been over a year since it was last updated. the new land is giving me crazy vibes from a mix of Hunter X Hunter - The Dark Continent + Toriko - Gourmet World + a bunch of stuff i've read over the years. Still hyped for the next chapter. It would be awesome to see them use the mushroom field to train up their bodies and situational awareness. I do have one note however. Ranma told the King he would be on the lookout for wherever the orcs are coming from. Didnt they see at least where one source of Orcs were spawning when they used the Anima in the Edolas arc?
Curiosity44
2022-08-29 01:05:04 +0000 UTCThanks, I will try to look into it.
vimesenthusiast
2022-06-16 17:24:18 +0000 UTCI was just reading the story again up to this point, and I noticed that you got the names wrong for a couple of characters near the end of the chapter. It should have been King Victronious (Or close to that. I forget the spelling) and you seemed to have replaced Roland with "Tristan" for some reason.
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
2022-06-16 06:14:04 +0000 UTC
