Bhaalspawn2
Added 2019-05-30 03:24:05 +0000 UTCRL sucks. Not going to go into it now, but wil
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I will change that yes, that was from before I looked up the lore and then substituted the small health potion. Good call
vimesenthusiast
2019-06-04 13:31:59 +0000 UTCYou might need to fix the chapter then, cause here you state that he can only use it once a day until he picks a god. "I chose the Paladin template because I was worried I might have to go solo occasionally, and yes, I've always wanted to be a knight in shining armor. But until I decide what God I will pledge myself to, I can only use lay on hands once a day, although I can use turn undead three times. ".
Vysirez
2019-06-04 09:56:19 +0000 UTCYour reminder about Lay on Hands needs to be in the ending authors note. Also it needs to be a conflict point in the next chapter
2019-06-03 09:13:16 +0000 UTCLay on hands is a paladin skill but he needs to dedicate himself to a specific god in order to learn it.
vimesenthusiast
2019-06-02 17:28:59 +0000 UTCJust curious why Harry didn't use lay on hands at the end there. I guess he might not have thought of it, which will suck when he realizes.
Vysirez
2019-06-02 06:48:36 +0000 UTCI love this story! Very possibly my favorite of yours so far. And I'm glad, actually, that it came out when it did. Since it turned a pretty bad day around somewhat for me. So much so that I felt like trying to help out a bit and I've made a few edits for you. I've got them in a google doc and I'll PM you a link to it.
Novus
2019-06-02 04:55:16 +0000 UTC
