Making Waves 10
Added 2018-08-25 02:06:43 +0000 UTCHere is the next chapter of Making Waves! It's co
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Just some ideas that have been rattling around in my head. 1. Ranma’s character has not really developed or changed in a huge way since the beginning of the story. He/she has met most of her/his experiences as a kind of drifter or transient entity that blows into town and destroys everybody’s sense of reality. I feel Ranma needs to have his/her own reality, purpose or desires challenged. 2. Connected to the first point I feel that the romance and any pairings that don’t really challenge Ranma’s wanderlust, change or add to his desire to be stronger, or force him to further accept his female form as potentially able to experience sex would be token and stale. 3. Jenny, Mira and Erza. I find Jenny to be the most complete or stable pairing as Ranma has been emotionally hurt by her before, making him seem more willing to be vulnerable to Jenny’s wants and desires. Erza would be a second as she seems to be more willing to express her desires to Ranma in both forms (staring and blushing at Virgo’s ass as well as agreeing with Ranma’s comment on her panties). Mira feels forced with the competition, the sadism, and not finding Ranma’s female form very interesting or a good aspect (kinda dismissive of her enjoyment of the female form and the fact Ranma kinda looks like Erza). Anyway, thanks for listening. Still love the story and everything you are doing!
Aron Vanida
2018-09-25 22:22:04 +0000 UTCBtw, no idea how to make it work (with Mira-Erza) but I vote for harem!
Jacko Garcia
2018-09-23 11:28:42 +0000 UTCThe chapter was great, even if we didnt see any action (except for Phantom making the clown), it was an interesting chapter that never bored me... Hell, it took me 3 days to read it (I love to read in the bus XD) and one more day to go over some stuff I liked and it never felt slow or uninteresting. Excellent story, and while drama in story plot sometimes take us to an interesting turn, drama in a love triangle (square?) always end with a sad note or with one heroine "suddenly" falling for another to end the conflict and all that character development and evolution was a lie and you end hating that heroine. BTW, in that note, if this is not harem my vote goes for Jenny. While I like more Mira as a character, you write the best when it came with Jenny/Ranma interaction, it felt like there was never an akward moment even if talking about serious stuff and love problems, and they can have a lot of fun even just talking, and while the same happen with Mira, it always goes with a lot of flirting (not something bad, haha). And with Ersa... Ersa is great, but things with her looks forced and akward... Its not you writing her, just her character so you are doing a great job writing her like she is! Thx again, and sorry for my english and my late review =P
Jacko Garcia
2018-09-19 17:37:14 +0000 UTCJust finished the newest chapter havent had time until now to sit down and enjoy it :) I love this story and it has quickly become one of my favorites and is definetly in my top three when it comes to your work! Looking forward to the next chapter alot! :)
1000Sunny
2018-09-06 19:47:47 +0000 UTCI don't mean to show disinterest by not reviewing. This story is top tier awesome sauce and I always wait with anticipation for the next chapter
Link901
2018-09-01 09:33:01 +0000 UTCHeheh, true that. Guess the thought didn't occur to me. On the other hand, Natsu has demonstrated a rather remarkable ability to recover quickly whenever he 'puts his mind to it' so to speak. Who's to say that this wasn't one of those times? Oh well, I guess it doesn't really matter in the end.
Tellemicus Sundance
2018-08-29 23:40:06 +0000 UTCI like it, but the up coming fight has me sad for two reasons, first Ice magic would be the perfect power up, and second I want Ranma to finish what he started on the demon, as a bonus with Wendy around it wouldn't be impossible for her magic to save a certain ice magic teacher.
Lance Garvey
2018-08-29 23:08:22 +0000 UTCWho says natsu went all the way.? He was still suffering from element poisoning after all- it would have been the two girls doing alll the work, and might well have been quite painful for him.
vimesenthusiast
2018-08-29 15:26:44 +0000 UTCIdol have plans to solve that issue - the ki and ds fighting thing don’t worry. As for Wendy not being effected by motion sickness, I’ve mentioned that before and think it was an oversight in the original. Or just ‘motion sickness isn’t funny in girls’ sort of thing.
vimesenthusiast
2018-08-29 15:24:20 +0000 UTCI missed that in canon so thanks.
Unknownreader
2018-08-28 12:09:01 +0000 UTCIn the grand magic games it was explained once you reach a certain threshold of power as a dragon slayer, those motion sickness instincts kick in full force or at least something of that nature...its been a while lol. Anyways point is this wendy definitely stronger than canon wendy or at least more developed in terms of combat and instincts. Meh I tried.
Blitz
2018-08-28 03:55:41 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Hehehe, the story is moving closer to a possible encounter with Juvia, and I am interested to see what may or may not happen.
MacArther
2018-08-27 16:47:34 +0000 UTCI like it. But Wendy was never affected by motion sickness like the other dragon players. I think it could be that her trioa spell is her own magic so she doesn't build a resistance to it, but I don't know for sure. Also I never really liked that ki and dragon slayer magic cancel out each other. Hope you have a plan for that because I see Ranma kicking serous butt afterwards. Please let him get benefits of both together. There was also a time in the drunken fight scene you wrote Ezra instead of Mira, just a heads up.
Unknownreader
2018-08-26 19:31:04 +0000 UTCgreat character interacions & it's nice to see jenny again
Jacob Pruitt
2018-08-25 20:22:45 +0000 UTCWhoo-hoooo!! Natsu got laid! Man, I wish we could've seen that! A threesome with twins? Oh, it would've been glorious!! And while it's a bit different from the past couple of chapters, this was a very nice change of pace. Rather than being run ragged through a gauntlet of battles and traps, we're treated to a very rare moment of peace that allows the characters to bond in a nonviolent setting. Very well done, and something that is definitely needed in this story. So, we've got a few hints of what's to come in the next chapter or two. The whole fiasco with Galuna Island, a new Demon for Ranma to kill and Mira to absorb, and a promise of conflict between Fairy Tail and Phantom Lord. I wonder just how different this version is going to be, since I can't imagine that this new, Lady-like Lucy will have runaway from home like in canon. If so, then that means that her father didn't/shouldn't send the mission that triggered the Guild War between them. Yes, I know that it was just a catalyst to a war that had been building over the generations, but still. This means that the opening volley between them is going to be quite different. And considering that one guy got a faceful of Wendy's magic, that means that there's a good possibility of Gajeel wanting to fight her instead of Natsu, to get the measure of the newest acknowledged Dragon Slayer rather than one who's always been in the papers. Heh, poor Wendy, being mistaken for a Fairy Tail wizard like that. There's all kinds of irony behind that, isn't there? Oh well. If there was one thing I truly was disappointed in with this chapter, it was (as I stated earlier) the fact that we weren't treated with a scene of certain bedroom activities that were happening. Heh, seeing how the Lisanna twins managed to get through Natsu's thick skull and FINALLY trigger his hormones would've TOTALLY worth seeing since I imagine that it would've been quite a comedic show! But, that aside, this was a very, VERY enjoyable chapter. A good change of pace and a great way for them to determine where to go from here. Excellent work as usual!
Tellemicus Sundance
2018-08-25 12:51:59 +0000 UTCWhat he said! ;)
Hiryo
2018-08-25 04:40:06 +0000 UTCHow many words was this chap, because alongside you two other authors decided to update a 10k, and 20k, fic; seriously ya'll in cahoots or sonething? All jokes aside was very happy to see this updated as I was curious when it would, two hours of reading before bed will always be a great send off. The sexual tension is rising on all peeps, except the Strauss twins, good on them, though I wonder what natsu thinks lmao. On that regard fluff was great a true relaxing chapter interluding and showing us what's to come. Looking forward to this new demon and maybe the chance of seliah encounters. Wonder if it'll bring any development on his devil slayer abilities and with that the conflicting dominance. I assume after that will lead to conflict with phantom lord in whatever way you make it so and by that time he should be able to encounter makorov for advice...if he remembers lol. So in short looking forward to what's next in terms of romance, adventure, and combat. Thanks for the read!
Blitz
2018-08-25 04:24:28 +0000 UTC
