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This page says a lot about Malthus, to me. He might know of Al's mannerisms and can parrot him to an extent, but beyond that he's got no idea how Al would navigate a situation where Ethan's clearly preoccupied with other concerns. If Ethan was having a gut feeling something was off before, he's gotta be hearing blaring sirens that this is the bad place now!

I decided to make Ethan a little more serious about rejecting Faux Al's advances and I'm tossing out the idea that Malthus' face would be clearly morphing through at the end there like I had written in the roughs. I originally intended it to be a "when Malthus gets mad the illusion falters", and that's true, like here:

But it's not the right place and time for that, in this scene! (•́⌄•́๑)

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I’m skeptical that Ethan can get out of this on his own since Al couldn’t even when he knew it was an illusion, but maybe there’s more to Transference that we don’t know about yet.

Sara Tharen

Malthus fucked up Al's fucking

Angie

i had the exact same thought!

lisainthesky

Oooo yeah you definitely get the impression that this impression of Al is coming from a person who understands sex but not love. And the fact that he's dropping the mask so fast goes to show that Malthus isn't particularly skilled at patience or subtlety either haha. His efforts at emotional manipulation are very hamhanded, more brute force than anything else...maybe because he feels like his upper hand is starting to slip and he's getting desperate, sloppy?

PT

yeah fr AL has wayyy more charisma than that. and he would never brush ethans feelings off and just say "lets fuck"

alex

Malthus probably knows cum, possibly knows passion, but has no idea about compassion. Also, I think we should take a moment to appreciate Al's cleverness because he'd never use a line like "let me pull some of that stress out of you through your dick"

Magic Bat

Malthus: "But I offered him sex with Al! Why isn't it working?"

brashion

Go with your gut instincts Ethan! Maybe Adrian can channel through him to help break this hold Malthus has on our boy! Thanks for making this so suspenseful, Asmodeus! 😬🥰

Theo

You can remember Ethan!!! Malthus doesn't understand Al...

LadyKya

Malthus acting as Al feels like reading low effort fan fiction. The broad strokes of personality are there but there's no subtlety.

Jax

I’m so glad Ethan’s not falling for that, but also scared of what’s gonna happen when Malthus stops pretending 😬

TarableTRex

Or he would flirt, make a silly joke, divert the energy to something lighthearted.

Arend

i dont think malthus has any concept of consent or boundaries so i feel like this scene is about to get really uncomfortable. ☹️ the real al would ask ethan why he feels that way rather than just try to get in his pants

alex


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