Pg 371 Panel Preview
Added 2021-02-17 01:10:53 +0000 UTCHooboy! This page, and to some extent, the next, is thoroughly kicking my ass, haha. I tried to cram too much into these two pages when it would have been better served with a little more breathing room. I'm not happy with the word balloon layouts/flow anywhere in this page in particular, but unfortunately deadlines don't care about my desire to scrap a page this late in the update week, so it's onto the inks we go. I'll pocket this as another lesson in pacing - 370 pages in and there's still plenty for me to learn, womp womp! ┐(´-｀)┌
Comments
I think the bunching of dialog bubbles adds to the atmosphere that theyre all a little on edge and talking over one another !
Malisa Adams
2021-02-18 10:39:44 +0000 UTCLove this world building. True, last panel is a little tight but rather have the exposition. That conversation with Al was a lot of pages ago so worth it.
Allan Meyer
2021-02-17 05:42:32 +0000 UTC
