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Added 2021-01-08 01:19:05 +0000 UTCAl sheds a little more light on his family problems, and Ethan takes it all in stride...for a moment, anyway ( ´△｀)
This page was difficult to do, for some reason - I had a lot of wordy dialogue written for Ethan that just wasn't jiving with me when it came to finally plugging it into the word balloons! I ended up ditching a lot of his exposition bcs I thought it was a little more realistic that a sudden puzzle piece falling into place in his mind would be startling enough to just come out as a simple "he was there" whisper. I hope it still works, at any rate!
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Well, when Ethan says something like "I didn't do anything at all! I should have stopped him!", that's like a SUPER BIG OPPORTUNITY for Al to say "...I couldn't do anything... I couldn't stop him... I can't lose you again..." But that can't happen. Because if it does, my neighbors will call the police, convinced I'm being violently murdered.
Sarah Krupa
2021-01-10 05:08:31 +0000 UTC"Oh, and while we are coming clean, babe, I was here before..."
Your future ex-wife (BH)
2021-01-09 18:51:30 +0000 UTCNow that I know the lore of the cats in this world, that cat is creepy as hell . . . literally. That expression is perfect for this scene. Ever notice that there is conveniently placed bird seed/crumbs for the birds at the academy to attract the cats? Who is putting out the seed? Who is feeding the spy cats?
Atlanas E. Kildarin
2021-01-09 18:22:06 +0000 UTC
