Script - Surprise Buffet
Added 2024-05-19 08:40:56 +0000 UTC
Earlier on Twitter I posted about a vorny idea I had;
"Really wanting to draw a compilation of one of my OC's eating a bunch of smaller prey π©π
Packing them away, one by one β€οΈ Making their gut that much bigger and squirmier by the end of it π€€"
I wanted to use my giraffe OC, Eve, for maximum vorny effect~ But she's rather subby and shy, so it wouldn't fit her character to act all smug and cocky gulping down a bunch of prey. HOWEVER, she does have a rather passionate feeder girlfriend! The pictures attached are the respective character refs~
BUT- this is what I came up with;
Jazz feeding Eve a bunch of willing friends. Possibly some Patron volunteers??
- Eve "I-I'm just really not sure about tH-!" says stunned, Jazz shoving her first victim down her gullet "Awh babe~ Don't talk when there's food in your mouth!" Jazz is fully visible
- Eve struggles, her throat bulging wide with her meal fully engulfed by her, maybe a tail or a hand poking out of her mouth
- Copy of the last panel, She gives a big nGULP! sending the big lump in her throat traveling down
- Eve huffing and puffing next to an enamored Jazz, belly wriggling and bulging under her giant tits, stretching out her outfit. Jazz visibly has a boner. Eve is reaching a hand out to her belly out of shock "W-woa-..."
- Flipped perspective, Eve's face off to the side looking at the prey in front of her. "ME NEXT!!" as it waves it's arms in the air frantically volunteering. Eve looks wide-eyed and blushing. Jazz's head is on the opposite side looking rather smug.
- FFW to the next prey launching itself down Eve's gullet, knocking her on her way to her back, wriggling belly in view. Jazz watching in stunned amusement. Eve is taken by surprise!
- Copy of previous panel. With Eve's head no longer in view, her belly now suddenly grows in size! Eve's clothes bursting to accommodate her bigger size. Jazz looking like a drooling dog
- Bust of Eve's face as she's laying on the ground looking rather woozy/ taken aback.
- Duplicate of previous panel, Eve suddenly looking shocked as a bunch of shadows surround her
- From Eve's perspective, a bunch of eager prey are circled around her, just WAITING to dive down her gullet
- Onomatopoeia compilation of gulping and slurping, muffled protesting and glorping and glutting!
- Post-buffet and Eve is barely propping herself up from being so engorged on so many willing prey. She looks dazed and out of it, trying to recoup. Only for Jazz to tease her off-screen "Oh hunny, don't forget about dessert~"
- Close-up perspective of Jazz having now climbed up on Eve's belly, she gives her a kiss
- Jazz then pries open Eve's maw! Much to Eve's dismay
- Jazz shoves herself down Eve's gullet, already halfway down. Her butt sticking out! Jazz's hind legs are using Eve's belly as leverage to shove herself deeper into Eve's throat. Eve is too stuffed and woozy to be shocked
- Eve makes one final strained, hearty gulp! The big bulge of her girlfriend in her throat traveling down to join the rest of her prey in her gut
- Final pic of Eve letting her head flop to the ground out of exhaustion (similar to panel 6), massive wriggling belly in view. Thought bubble face of Jazz looking melty happy and pleased~
- Final final internal panel of all the prey squeezed into all of her four stomachs
*Each prey gets bigger than the last
I'd love to hear your thoughts and opinions on this!