Dungeon Divers Page 3a Redraw
Added 2021-11-08 07:43:07 +0000 UTCHere's the first half of the page 3 redraw! The original had six panels, I wanted to give them a little more air.
And the original, for those interested in comparing the two.
You'll note a font change! I'm going to be revising all the pages with the mixed case font. It'll make reading the book easier on the eyes. I'll post some more font-revised pages soon.
Comments
Two thirds of poll respondents like the new font better. We had a discussion about this on twitter if you're interested in the details. https://twitter.com/jonrosenberg/status/1456695349595213826
Jonathan Rosenberg
2021-11-08 17:46:40 +0000 UTCWith those eyebrows, I'm kind of expecting their hostage to sound like Mel Brooks.
Auros Harman
2021-11-08 17:08:35 +0000 UTCI like the new art a lot. You are really adding a lot of detail and expressiveness. I'm not sure about the new font, though. I think I'm used to the standard all-caps comic font from decades of reading comics, so the new font just feels wrong to me. When I first saw it, I wondered "Is that a placeholder font until he puts in the real one?" Purely a matter of taste, both fonts are perfectly readable to me, but mark down one vote for the older font (not that this is a democracy, do whatever you think is best, oh Benevolent Dictator)
Brett Kuehner
2021-11-08 17:02:47 +0000 UTCPlease excuse me if this has been asked before, but... if one of your party is a cleric, does that make them a holy diver? I'll show myself out.
Halloween Jack
2021-11-08 14:47:05 +0000 UTC
