Comic Commission: Get Those Spots (1/3)
Added 2021-09-14 16:33:00 +0000 UTCStill working on the rest pages of the comic. ~_~
I'm trying to finish them asap, so stay tuned. :)
Comments
Thanks, i've fixed that. :)
Benjay24
2021-09-19 20:50:50 +0000 UTCwell only because you called them something they didn't like. ¬u¬ And didn't you enjoy it ?
Benjay24
2021-09-19 20:50:32 +0000 UTCThank you. QuQ It's really hard to make time to be honest, but i try to work fast.
Benjay24
2021-09-19 20:50:00 +0000 UTCBtw, just a small thing I thought I'd point out with Irwind's dialogue before he tickles the poor guy. He says "Your nipples are most sensitive spots." I think adding "your" would make the sentence make more grammatical sense. Like "Your nipples are YOUR most sensitive spots." Other than that, fantastic first page. Can't wait to see the rest. ^w^
Paws4Me
2021-09-15 23:08:14 +0000 UTCThis is nice so far. Can't wait to see what the other pages look like. :)
Flyynt
2021-09-15 11:09:47 +0000 UTCWell, he should probably just tell them what they want if he knows what's good for him. I know from experience those two are ruthless. Especially since they know your weakspot. I just really hope those two morons don't come after me again. Just for one day. That's all I ask. TwT
Paws4Me
2021-09-14 17:22:56 +0000 UTCI'm realy impressed by your motivation Ben, you work on your comic, on sketch request, on perdonal classic draw and you even found time to do comic commission it's just crazy XwX. I realy no know how you do it, me I'm already overtaked by work and I only have my personal projects to do... I think I couldn't stand so much pressure >\<... You realy are strong buddy and hey this first page already put us in the mood , you are wonderful ! >~<
Hake-Feretto
2021-09-14 16:38:15 +0000 UTC
