The Cyanfire Origins I Page 69
Added 2020-07-07 20:10:56 +0000 UTCCircle of Heirs, finally, another important group in this universe has been introduced. A bunch of demigods solving impossible issues with their power.
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heh, well it doesn't have to be elegant but a decent dress is enough, just not to show topless like he did. ¬u¬
Benjay24
2021-02-22 20:12:21 +0000 UTCWait....Hawaian shirts are not exactly elegant...I thought he had to dress elegant. Oh well, Circle of heirs is a good name for a group of demigods also Canopy 8 looks fancy! Great job.
Cheshirebear
2021-02-19 16:57:38 +0000 UTCThat's an interesting idea. >XD But Sonny is not into tickling sadly.
Benjay24
2020-07-16 20:45:22 +0000 UTCThis might sound a little strange but imagine sonny tickling benjay's belly under the table with his monkey handy feet. While at the restaurant. Hehe. That would be interesting.
Flyynt
2020-07-08 17:44:09 +0000 UTCOf course, but I'm assuming Sonny will be involving the entire household, somehow, since the others were also invited. I can only imagine that it's inevitable.
macko-okcam
2020-07-08 16:55:18 +0000 UTChehe but there's a fun fact. Actually Benjay sees him as a role model, at least he doesn't plan to tickle him. :P
Benjay24
2020-07-08 16:27:19 +0000 UTCthanks, just fixed that.
Benjay24
2020-07-08 16:26:21 +0000 UTCI wonder if Sonny has any idea what he's getting himself into.
macko-okcam
2020-07-08 00:25:05 +0000 UTCJust one minor grammar mistake I noticed is in the sentence where Sonny Kong is explaining what the Circle is. He says: "We solve problems that security patrol can have never done." I think it'd make more sense if you removed the word "can" from the sentence. Again, just an idea. You don't have to take it seriously.
Paws4Me
2020-07-07 20:40:51 +0000 UTCOoh. Canopy 8 looks fancy as heck. And that's a fair question from Benjay, how did Sonny know it was him who took out Silvermoon? I can't wait to find out about that, and this Circle of Heirs. Great story so far.
Paws4Me
2020-07-07 20:37:40 +0000 UTC
