Slime's Story P1
Added 2021-06-23 12:48:51 +0000 UTCThe late train start.. and the new story begins..
Thank you for everyone support~
Hope you will like the story~
Let me know if you want it to continue~
P/s: I don't know how to express the sound effect well enough but hope you like it~
Comments
Thanks~ I will try to~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-09-13 01:28:38 +0000 UTCMy favorite story need continuation thats for sure awesome job bro
Fábio Sousa
2021-09-12 23:14:13 +0000 UTCThank you very much~ I will do to cotinue it~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 21:05:18 +0000 UTCgreat story and please continue with the story :)
Delfringer
2021-06-23 18:42:47 +0000 UTCRoger roger~ Thank you for your support~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 14:32:06 +0000 UTCit's absolutely alright. Don't worry about it.
mrmiro177
2021-06-23 14:31:35 +0000 UTCI updated the link~ Sorry for this mistake~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 14:28:20 +0000 UTCwe all make mistakes in the heat of passion hanako..
mrmiro177
2021-06-23 14:27:33 +0000 UTCOh shoot!! I forgot to put an download link for it. Please wait for a moment. Really sorry about that😖😖😖
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 14:23:31 +0000 UTCcan this be downloaded?
mrmiro177
2021-06-23 14:21:29 +0000 UTCTo exlain that they were on the late train and with an impact of the storm~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 14:19:31 +0000 UTCThanks for your thoughful comment~ It’s a stand alone story and it will have more part~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 13:47:16 +0000 UTCThanks a lot~
Hanako Shizumi
2021-06-23 13:46:19 +0000 UTCIs this a sequel to anything, or a stand-alone story? EDIT: That was very nice either way, good job. I'm a big fan of the women's outfits (particularly the older girlfriend with the leather jacket, and the "Campaign Girl" with the pink and blue outfit), and I loved the horror atmosphere. My only remark would be that it's a bit unbelievable that the girlfriend didn't react, or try to interrupt in any way, when the first possessed schoolgirl made the moves on her boyfriend, only confronting him afterward; and that her friend Michiko didn't react at all either. It seems strange, really, that no one shouted or made any sort of comment when two people started banging in the middle of the train, lol. I also wish we would've seen the "Campaign Girl" get taken over. But great job! Nice story, always love me some mind-controlling parasites.
2021-06-23 13:37:06 +0000 UTCgreat job
mrmiro177
2021-06-23 13:22:21 +0000 UTC
