Spice of Life Comic Discussion
Added 2020-03-24 00:03:25 +0000 UTCAnd here is the final version of "Spice of Life." It took a pretty significant change from the previous earlier iterations. We completely changed the plot to it as well and the punchline changed. Originally the humor was mainly in Vinyl and Spike burning their insides and Octavia reacting to it. We did that but added a bit to Octavia's character too and completely altered early scene ideas. Improvement or not?
This Thursday I hope to have the monthly games list released.
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I was thinking they were being total wimps based on the rough draft, so this checks out.
Borg Lord
2020-03-25 00:24:03 +0000 UTCI'm thinking we need to include Octavia more. :)
2020-03-24 21:08:14 +0000 UTCThis consolidates my headcannon of Octavia being an absolute bada** :D. I like this version better than the draft.
Horatio Pitt
2020-03-24 21:07:13 +0000 UTCAwesome! Glad you liked it. :)
2020-03-24 18:58:21 +0000 UTCThank you!
2020-03-24 18:57:46 +0000 UTCSo cute! I love the twist where the totally calm and reserved Octavia can handle it like nothing.
subaruanon
2020-03-24 00:20:55 +0000 UTCOh yeah, I do like this version better! Funny stuff.
Andrew Pam
2020-03-24 00:10:09 +0000 UTC
