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Alternative Friday Episode

The ABOVE picture is the original drawing of this episode but the final version is posted below.  You will see there are TONS of changes made between the two versions.  Do you have a preference?  

Here are some of the changes and why.  Panel one we fixed Spike's weird face... Panel two we changed the clock and Starlight's face as well as other minor changes.  Panel three had a complete redesign because the depth was all wrong... it still kind of is...  Minor facial changes on panel 4, 5, and 6 as well as a wording change on 6.  I think overall the changes made were for the better, but I still do love the Glimmer faces in panel 5 and 6.  6 makes her look more angry so we changed that to leave the viewer on a cliff hanger of what she might really be thinking... I guess this continues on next week.


Alternative Friday Episode

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I appreciate the response. I'm glad the changes had their desired affect.

Thank you for sharing. Indeed, you are right.

Those small changes on those panels you mentioned actually do make a huge difference. I like that you saw that and changed them because it is better. Faces do make a huge difference and have Glim be like that on the last panel does make me feel like "what is she thinking now?"

This is quite relatable; that feeling of "I should have said something earlier"

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