Unreleased Comic
Added 2019-04-28 04:42:30 +0000 UTCThis has been unreleased because I think it's too simple and not funny. But I tend to be wrong at choosing what people like, lol. Hopefully you enjoy it or not. Feel free to critique and choose some more games from our Steam list if you are a $5 subscriber/donator.
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Thank you for the thorough response, HP. We will use some of it. :)
2019-04-30 00:18:19 +0000 UTCHi ATaF! I like the expressions, especially Twi's taste bliss face in panel 3. My suggestions for alternate approaches: Replace panel 2 with a Twi checking if there are no eyewitnesses. Or a confrontation in panel 4 with some thin excuses towards Glimmy and/or Spike. Or showing Twi in panel 2 slicing the cake wedge but eating the large piece in panel 3. Either way, in my opinion this strip in any form would be appreciated by the audience.
Horatio Pitt
2019-04-29 16:21:46 +0000 UTCOkay, it will be scheduled. Going to change it slightly.
2019-04-29 01:14:42 +0000 UTCThanks.
2019-04-29 01:14:26 +0000 UTCI love it! I love Twiggy piggy, she's so cute. Her face looking at the pie! You should totally release it. "too simple and not funny" I think it's "simply hilarious"
Gray
2019-04-29 01:12:21 +0000 UTCIt's simple but I like it.
Borg Lord
2019-04-28 16:33:36 +0000 UTCsave it for the next pi day :) [maybe change Twi to Soarin? >_
kallenin
2019-04-28 09:02:15 +0000 UTC
