Amanda
Added 2023-06-27 03:31:09 +0000 UTC
Comments
I really like Amanda's new pose here, it's very dynamic and gives a great sense of how unsteady Amanda's balance is, and you really nailed her fearful expression! Her body in general looks pretty good too, from her hair to her boobs to her hands. The only criticisms I have is you forgot the dialogue I asked for, and that Amanda's right foot looks kinda weird. But literally everything else looks great Tmimi!
June
2023-09-21 23:30:25 +0000 UTCThis is very good! A bit different from what I requested, mostly missing the close up of Amadna's foot shaking, but I still very much like how things came out. I imagined Amanda just standing on still water, so I appreciate you taking the time to draw her actually surfing on a wave. Her smug expression also looks cute, and her surprised expression also does, and I love the way you drew her legs and feet and how her foot slips off the board, and the water effect on her foot as she slips. And the extra variant of her actually completely falling off her board was a great bonus, love her pose their, and how she crashes into the ocean and splashes water is a nice touch. Her bikini and boobs also look great, just like the rest of her body. Overall, thank you for all the effort you put into this request, Tmimi. Also, love the detail of the "Luna Nova" symbol on Amanda's surfboard. And the colors of the board really work for her.
Janet
2023-06-27 04:52:58 +0000 UTCThis is pretty cute Tmimi, love Amanda's expressions here. Her pose also looks pretty nice, and her falling off the board in the last panel made me chuckle. Great job!
Seed
2023-06-27 04:01:19 +0000 UTC
