Major edit for chapter 169
Added 2024-03-05 00:51:48 +0000 UTCAs pointed out by some readers, the chapter was pretty boring. So I cut down some parts that were repetitive and added a whole section at the end. Please tell me if you like it more.
Comments
Yeah, I like the added section at the end, the other one felt very sudden when it stopped.
Overlord1993
2024-03-05 18:47:50 +0000 UTChmm, interesting idea, though it might be better to save it for later when Thorian needs a proper "civil engineer" (I know civil engineering doesn't exist as a profession in the medieval ages, but something of that sort)
omar el amrani
2024-03-05 15:21:37 +0000 UTCI just read the chapter, so I must have missed the original... bummer I feel like I could have aided but didn't. I do suggest adding to the meeting with william the topic of toxic disposals as an I've breaker. Since they had that lull before talking about the vassal negotiations, thorian could ask them about how best to deal with that and make some remark about hygiene etc...
ManguKing
2024-03-05 07:05:29 +0000 UTC
