Definitely a Better Start- (WIP)

*I added captions to everything if you wanna know stuff :3

About ~55 hours since the last time if you're curious

That is why I do the formless blobs on a first draft... For right now I'm kind of painting in broad strokes. Not trying to get any individual part done, just trying to get something together that you guys can judge for yourself whether you're interested in it or not - because I think there can be different types of adult comics driven by a narrative. Even if you have the same kinks you can have different executions, and entirely different narrative styles, and not everyone is going to love those same styles.

The story I'm writing is mostly about the character drama that comes from the people who live in this world where women seemingly have an innate ability to eat people. The effects of some sort of magic from long ago.

There is an actual conclusion to the story that I want to work towards, and so I'm using a story structure that allows me to still have stakes for the main characters- A story told from multiple perspectives, with the characters themselves being the ones pushing the story forward - Both pred and prey

From a narrative perspective the thing that interested me the most was the sharp disconnect between the realities of vore from the characters perspective and the nature of the kink itself... Something that I wanted to actually explore in the story itself, so in the story there's a bit of a disconnect to what most characters view of what 'vore' is

Most people in this setting are not constantly exposed to vore - only the effects of it. For a character like Honey who is constantly exposed to vore, there's an interesting (for me) contrast between her attitude towards it and characters who have less exposure, like her old friends.

The flipside of it is also interesting to me, how some prey develop vore fetishes in secret - the compounding shame fueling arrousal - the same arrousal that's fighting against your own survival instincts, and that just loops back around into the feelings of shame... A pressure bomb that eventually explodes - Do they give in? Or do they find some sort of an outlet?

..Or does some lucky pred pick up on the warning signs and take advantage of their weakness..

But I wanna reiterate that this shit is a process, and it will take time - If anyone's still here looking to maximize your dollar per/ s3xy ratio... Despite the fact I was never a good option for that in the first place, I do apologize. I'm a people pleaser by nature tho so I'll be releasing this on Aryion eventually so long as I'm able to. Probably when Chapter 3 is being finished

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And a little bit of behind the scenes design work >.>

Fenn'Ra Cassela got the privilege of me finally sitting down and researching a naming scheme beyond 'just whatever feels right'... Now I just have to go back and do the 50 other placeholder names for characters and locations

I also might've hit the "thicc" button a few too many times on her.... but something something thematics-.. Yeah she can keep it.