page 15

Maybe you can change her position? There is a lot of images of her from the front, but none from the side. Approaching the image from below would also be nice... but your work is truly gold

Jsab

After checking all the pages a lot of times, specially the later, this is the one that seems more off to me. I don't know if they are the colors, or Jess face and mouth pose -maybe the expression should be in awe, shocked or feisty- but for an important part of the story like this, maybe it can be changed a bit. I've read that, when the first part is over you are planning on reworking certain pages. Is this one of them?

Jsab

Her saying "No! Not again." Would've been perfect. 😈🔥

Excellent splash page. The positioning of the characters reminds me a lot of Frazetta's art: a muscular man looking powerful and intimidating, usually paired with a helpless damsel in chains or hoisted over his shoulder. And Jess fills the role of damsel perfectly!

AluminumBands

An Excellent use of the frogtie. 😈🔥

Yes, I have an explanation in mind for her inability to break free.

Really enjoyed this, can’t believe this is only the halfway point! Do you prefer multiple-panel pages or big single images like these? Also just realised but in the original hangman story they never addressed how he was able to tie her, but then she broke out no problem when he wasn’t there; with this do you reckon you’ll provide your own take on why this is, or is this something we’re not supposed to think too hard about? Anyway good luck with your job, things are pickin up come summer and COVID lockdown lifting so if life gets in the way we’re all rooting for you here, take all the time you want! 🤘

JeanWorm

Spin-off series, confirmed

Well once she's gagged (very soon) I'll start including gag variants of each page in the download section of each post.

“Patience, Viceroy, patience! She will be gagged.” - Count Dooku

Any hints?

So much more

If these last three pages had appeared in a “real” comic when I was younger, my head would have exploded. I can’t believe there’s more to come!!!

GAG HER GAG HER GAG HER GAG HER!!!

LETSSS GOOOOO

Superbrony691

Finally! May they never part again.

destroxxiv

The well-timed lightning is a great touch.

Scenedusk

I see what you mean about the poses, but honestly it still works pretty damn well! Wonderful page! And yeah, work can be a bit of a bitch sometimes, but think of yourself first. Especially if you need a break. Good luck with the rest of your comic, looking forward to seeing where it leads you (and us).

cheleb

Sure, the poses could be a little more dynamic, but it’s still a damn good splash page! And love how Hangman has this whole arsenal of ropes now :D

FurryBound

I am not going to complain about the streak...given the splendid view above :) As someone who also gets overworked...I recommend you focus on you, make sure you get down time and relax and don't put yourself under more pressure

Devduck01

Power Shot to assert dominance

As an aside… he’s got some AWESOME upper body strength! I wish I could hold a 100+ pound woman with just one arm - not even my dominant one. We can only aspire to the level of strength this chad has.

Every page is worth the wait so please don't worry. Mad power shot - love it.

Tom

Well worth waiting for! Very dramatic picture. Interesting hangman has trussed SW into some sort of frog tie. Let’s hope Telikor decides to go down the gag route and has Hangman fully gag our damsel.

Very interesting~! Not exactly what I was expecting, but I like it. I see what you mean about Hangman's expression, but it's no big; don't worry about it too much! I'm sorry to hear your job isn't being very kind to you. I offer moral support :)

Had a feeling 15 would be a big dramatic image after 14’s buildup, and man is it ever! Liking how hangman is like, huge next to Jess, and how you’ve captured her vulnerability (her size next to him, the top down view of her, and the way she’s clearly twisting in the wind with no control from the way her head’s cocked), also like Hangman’s beard, indicates he literally just went straight from jail to here without stopping like the looney he is :) Can’t believe this is only the halfway point! Also sorry about your job, my own workplace has been real nose to the grindstone too, must be a summer thing. Here’s to hoping it’ll be better soon!

JeanWorm

Oh, I see what you mean. He's looking at the viewer instead of her. May be it's a subtle break the 4th wall' moment? The big bad guy all confident as he shaves his beard, looking at the mirror while talking to her or something?

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