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Ooooooh! Next page, people! Next paaaaaage!

I really like how the colours came out with this one. I've been in an awkward place in between wanting things to look multi-coloured and real, but also sort of abstract and drenched in the average colour of the environment.
They're two separate methods and half of colouring for me is knowing when to switch between them. When do you disobey how light works to make an important element stand out, etc.
I think it helps knowing when not to give an element that much attention, hence why in the third panel, the three goons are just kind of purple. Would have enhanced the message of that panel if they were realistically coloured? No. But it would have made the composition noisier.

Anyway. You put on a great show, Jessica, but I'm afraid I have to push the big red button now.

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Comments

Whatever happens next, I hope there's an armcarry :)

Bobko

I hoping to do both, sort of. Sudden, surprise bondage is a favourite of mine, but I can still take it in stages.

In the original hangman story, SW went from being looped by the lasso into a full hogtie. Are we getting to see how she’s fully trussed, or will it jump straight into her being restrained?

You say you never do action scenes, but this one seems to have gone quite well, bravo!

JeanWorm

Thoughts? Tape or cleave gag?

I’m predicted a lasso cinching both her arms together? Culminating into a hogtie?

When he snatches her. Next page.

When does he reveal he’s there watching?

'announce' himself?

When does hangman fully announce himself?

Interesting comment on coloring. I am a big fan of how you work with color in your compositions so it was enlightening to get a little insight on how you approach that part of the craft. Of course, it’s fantastic in a lot of other ways too! A great page with a lot of tension.

Scenedusk

Every panel of each page is building the suspense! The drawing, the colour, the story boarding!!! I can’t wait

Oh my god, she’s in perfect Lasso position 🤩 I’m beyond excited!

CaliBurrito

Yeah. The build up is just right. :D Very Sexy Jess!

Ronin

You shout: "Next paaaaaage!" I shout: "Wheeeeeeeeeen?"

Wonderverse

Right? What's not to love?

Wonderverse

This is a great final panel...victorious, stunningly beautiful, incredibly overconfident and with no clue as to what is coming next...

Devduck01

No spoilers! ;)

Devduck01

I almost expected a lasso to come down behind her

Bluejazzysongbird

Uh oh, she's not paying attention to what's behind her!

Sleepy Comics

This overconfidence is *bound* to be her undoing :D

To see Jess so tough and confident and sexy makes what's about to happen to her all the more delicious

As a fan of 'Dexter's Laboratory', Dee Dee had just pressed the button.

A fan

She only has one to remember.

It's time to pull the plug on this production and start a whole new one. Hope she's rehearsed her lines ;)

Lathiira


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