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I’ve been back to the original comic and literally within two comic panels Hangman has SW trussed up in a hogtie. No wonder I liked the comic so much !

At the current rate, about once every 1.35 weeks.

How often is best to check for updates?

I've story boarded first issue.

The chair! Fantastic, maybe a spin on the rope would be a new power neutralising noose that makes Jessica’s powers redundant. Have you already story boarded the full comic or do you write as you go along?

Well she has to return to the chair, obviously, but that will hardly be the full extent of it. As for gags, I'll plan to release variants, for people who fans of this or that gag type. I wonder what the best way to take input is when including what people want to see. It's impossible to please everyone, but I still want to try and give a roundly satisfying experience. But it shouldn't be surprising that the majority of her peril will be rope based, given Mr. H. Man, here.

Every other day I’m checking to see where we’re up, the tension is killing me. I really can’t wait to see the perils Jessica is going to end up in. Do you have any hints of what rigging and gags she’s going to succumb too ?

Maybe this is a bit fanboyish, but I am very much encouraged at your acknowledgement that we're all here to ogle and enjoy as unnecessarily sexy stuff happens to our heroine, even if it's at the expense of seamless story-telling. That is 100% OK with me, it's why I'm here, basically, and hearing it out loud is music to my ears. Also the sun-dappling of this sequence is lovely.

You speak the truth-say. At the end of the day, a big chunk of the point of this comic is to ogle lovely Jess here while peril befalls her, and weaving the story in and out of that naturally gratuitous content won't always be smooth. But now that you mention it, I did consider using the trope of having her listen to her answering machine while all this is going on. I still could if I can think of any exposition worth delivering. Once all the pages are out, I'm probably going to give them all a once over, just to touch them up in a way that hopefully makes the style more consistent, before packaging and releasing the full comic (at no extra cost to my patrons, of course) so I could also take that opportunity to insert some monologue here.

From experience, cramming up a comic page of too much stuff is a risk indeed. So I think it's good to be wary of that. Also, while your art is gorgeous and we all love Jessica here, I think three pages without dialogue in a row will detract from the pacing. I say three because I expect the next one be the same (it would be the natural completion of this sequence). But the comic will be 30 pages long so maybe it won't be really a problem once it will be read as a whole

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This page is beautiful (not just because of the lady in it, though that certainly helps). I love the colors and how "At-Home" it feels. The colors and look of her house really feel kinda comforting. As an aside, I've always loved that style of shoe. Can't wait for more!

Oh wow, this is great.

Amaniwolf

I'm no professional art critic. I love the lighting in this page. If a place is supposed to be cluttered with stuff to make it believable, then go for it!

A fan

I love the sensuality of her movements, keep up the great work.

Ooh, I love the afternoon feel of these last few pages. And I'm really digging how Spider-Woman's colours are already coming through while Jessica is undressing herself, with the red beneath the scarf and the yellow socks. I don't know if she's actually wearing the costume underneath or if it's just a cute indicator of it, but either way, you're already depicting her double identity in a really neat and somewhat subtle way. It makes us really anticipate the eventual reveal of the costume! Not to mention, if she is wearing the costume underneath, the erotic implications of her undressing herself to reveal a skintight costume. Looking forward to more!

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Oh the anticipation of seeing her in costume for the first time is building!!!! Keep up the great work!

Devduck01

It's such a thrill to see your skill as a sequential artist grow...I'm really enjoying each new page! Keep up the good work~<3

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