I am pretty tired at the moment, so I don't have much to say here. If I think of something interesting or witty tomorrow then I will update these comments. I haven't even proofread this, so feel free to point out mistakes.
Have a nice evening! :)
Update:
So I did make one or two changes to couple of pages, such as page 15, and I noticed that page 16 was completely missing somehow - which was kind of a key page to the whole plot. Sorry for messing that up. Brand new files have been uploaded.